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LO lust VE

My eyes are your prisoner
as the moon bathes your skin
the seduction of your curves
To taste of this sweetest sin

Your bare form quietly entices
as your smooth skin burns my touch
A mind that wants an eternity
Versus a body that wants to rush

My kisses savour every inch of you
as passion slips through your lips
Your warm breath gives me chills
Lost in the motion of your hips

You hold me with every ounce of strenghth
As sharp nails pierce my skin
Our love and our lust unite
forming this pleasure felt within

Pleasure threatens to cloud our motives
Love's rays shine brightly through
These intense feelings are secondary
To the love I feel for you



by Brandon
posted on 04/10/2009

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Comment by MyMisery: Sep 1, 2009 5:55 am
im speachless! ive been there
and for someone to be able to describe it
its amazing
i love it
i could read this over, and over
and never grow weary of it
keep up the masterpeice
Comment by PenandPaper: Jul 23, 2009 7:28 pm
This is so amazing! You really created a masterpiece Smiley
Comment by supbuttercup: Apr 10, 2009 10:46 pm
very intimate and lovely
Comment by SmilingTragedy: Jul 9, 2009 8:36 pm
FRickIn AwEsOmESmiley I lOVe IT! TeLls NO lIes!
Comment by starrgirl2000: Apr 11, 2009 5:50 pm
that was very good lots of intimacy it was amazing and passionate
Comment by FaithDanielle: Apr 11, 2009 5:26 am
This is great! love the intimacy
Comment by Iamyou: Apr 11, 2009 9:10 am
Yes, yes, yes, yessss
Oh sorry
I very much liked the poem
I will just leave now
Comment by Selene: Apr 11, 2009 3:40 am
beautiful and seductive, gentle yet passionate - amazing as usual.
Comment by Angel: Apr 11, 2009 8:35 pm
awlsome poem man.
Comment by monsterswithin: Apr 10, 2009 10:08 pm
OMG!!!!

WOW!!!

What a wonderful poem!
Comment by Iggy: Apr 11, 2009 2:24 pm
You do a phenomenal job capturing something that is so hard to put into words, yet with such eloquence. This is something to proud of... Really proud of...
Comment by Unique: Apr 11, 2009 4:48 pm
i agree with all the previous comments. you are a talented writer :]
Comment by stephcwragg: Apr 11, 2009 11:30 pm
like it.
Comment by underdogkai: Apr 11, 2009 10:34 pm
very sexy and awesome i love it
Comment by oceanreverie: Apr 12, 2009 7:17 am
wowe this is beautiful! i completely agree with Iggy; you were able to capture something that is so hard to put into words. wonderful work! you said it better then i ever could!
Comment by mytragedy: Apr 13, 2009 9:56 am
Awesome job! I think you created an excellent piece that demonstrates your talent.
Comment by loveless: Apr 13, 2009 10:07 am
Hey sexy, that was a great poem. Im glad met you and read your poems. They give me such inspiration. Keep on telling it. ~PeanutButter
Comment by autumnangel1115: Apr 13, 2009 3:48 pm
I absolutly loved this poem! Wow, very beautiful and well written. Amazing! Thank you for sharing!
Comment by TheWanderingAngel: Apr 13, 2009 8:01 pm
This has a unique feel to it. It's really good.
Comment by mcmil: Apr 14, 2009 6:02 am
woah...
Comment by tophat9: Apr 14, 2009 7:09 am
Very cool
Comment by NeverTheEnd92: Apr 14, 2009 12:15 pm
Great poem and very cute. XD
Comment by blackheart: Apr 14, 2009 8:00 pm
Great writing...a good accurate description
of intimacy
Comment by ColdHeartedPoet: Apr 14, 2009 9:06 pm
You are an amazing writer, keep it up! =D
Comment by Perpetual: Apr 15, 2009 6:01 am
nice title, and whats more is, excellent poem. its like idk...woah! ;)
Comment by SilentBeauty: Apr 15, 2009 1:55 pm
i love this its amazing keep it up
Comment by FallenAngel666: Apr 15, 2009 4:54 pm
WoW i really enjoyed this poem so much that i got lost in it. great job.
Comment by Bexpheebs: Apr 16, 2009 2:35 am
nice Smiley
Comment by darklilgirl: Apr 16, 2009 9:16 am
wow this is really good i like this one keep it up SmileySmileySmiley
Comment by Chrason: Apr 16, 2009 10:15 am
wow. i loved it. so true. so very very true.
Comment by mylifeasacutter: Apr 17, 2009 6:14 pm
i love this its amazing
Comment by ForsakenNight: Apr 18, 2009 3:33 am
Wow, three words... That was intense you had me hooked with every word. I loved it. :]
Comment by BreakTheFall: Apr 20, 2009 11:35 am
omg this is such an awesome poem.
Comment by fallenangel24: Apr 21, 2009 8:44 am
great poem very good !!!

keep righting Smiley
Comment by TMacias: May 4, 2009 3:08 pm
Brilliant... LOL... Amazing
Comment by HeartlessAngel: May 18, 2009 8:12 am
Amazing poem. Simply lovely. I love this.
Comment by alysiarulz: May 21, 2009 2:42 pm
LOVE IT!
Comment by Greyhoundfb: May 23, 2009 9:21 pm
wow man thats great it is very true.
Comment by Iamapencil: May 28, 2009 6:59 pm
wow that was amazeing!
Comment by DakotahStymiest: Jun 1, 2009 6:32 pm
well done.
Comment by christinababe903: Jun 7, 2009 11:20 am
i love this poem
Comment by Itami: Jun 17, 2009 5:27 pm
Cool poem. Never thought about how love and lust works at the same time.
Comment by jaybayybayy808: Oct 21, 2009 8:32 pm
awesome :]
Comment by Fathom: Oct 29, 2009 4:13 pm
this made me want to call him over tonight lol
Comment by dangitsmaryjane: Nov 19, 2009 7:02 pm
<3
Comment by nina777: Nov 3, 2009 1:30 pm
nice poem i like it
Comment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: Nov 16, 2009 10:18 am
OMG I loved it so much
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