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key to my heart

Imprisoned behind the bars you call "love",
I hopelessly dream with a wandering gaze
As the couples walk by in amorous stride
Hand in hand, side by side, equal parts
They are two halves of something sacred
Bliss is evident from corners of their lips
In which they pursue with a tender kiss

I console the envy and ache in my heart
With a hopeful and reassuring phrase
"He will transform into that man
To come sweep you from where you stand
His key to your heart will turn
And unleash passion's long-gone return."

However,
My mind knows what my heart will not admit
That perhaps, this boy's key will just not fit

by shyhallow
posted on 06/20/2008

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Comment by dontXgetXlostXinXheaven: Jun 25, 2008 7:40 pm
good poem i enjoyed it
Comment by hankgoold09: Jun 24, 2008 1:44 am
great poem
Comment by perfectandbroken: Jun 23, 2008 4:29 am
great poem
vote up for sure
Comment by loveandhope: Jun 22, 2008 7:28 pm
COOL SmileySmiley
Comment by greybutterfly: Jun 22, 2008 3:24 pm
wow Smiley great
Comment by squirrelluver2: Jun 22, 2008 10:20 am
The poem was great and I couldn't stop reading it. I must've read it 25 times before I commented. It is absolutely fantastic!
Comment by zubair: Jul 1, 2008 8:22 am
Really enjoyed read it. Good work Smiley
Comment by ImThatBloodyMassacre: Jun 21, 2008 6:49 pm
nice. i really like it. and understand it. Open smile
Comment by jacobc: Jul 1, 2008 10:45 am
I think you should give this boy a try!
Comment by angelgirl: Jun 22, 2008 6:46 pm
nice i love it
Comment by Bourne: Jun 21, 2008 7:52 am
yeah i agree with friendz you've got an awesome display of diction in this one. and it's really direct and to the point. great poem.
Comment by TheDarkShadow: Jun 21, 2008 9:25 pm
i really wish i could write love poetry

this made me smile ^_^
Comment by friendZdogZ: Jun 21, 2008 6:23 am
wow this is amazing. you your really wordy, lol. love it! way cool! oh yea and really dramatic but I love that!
Comment by darksideofme: Jun 21, 2008 4:53 am
This is good.... maybe a tad overkill but thats what makes most poetry really great... I'm voting it up.
Comment by monalove: Jun 21, 2008 3:37 am
awww thats well good hun

compleatly true aswell

i don't relli know how to use this site

lol =/
Comment by shirotora: Jun 22, 2008 2:32 am
this poem is stunning.
I loved every line of it.
great job.
x
Comment by bluepetals: Jun 26, 2008 5:03 am
Love this poem, especially the last bit.
Comment by XfroggieluverX: Jul 3, 2008 10:56 am
I LOVE IT<3
Comment by gottaluvme: Jul 7, 2008 11:39 am
I love how you captured the most amazing feelings of being in love and yet the turning point at the end just made it all perfect. Totally real and great.
Comment by xxBlackRainbowxx: Jul 13, 2008 2:17 am
i love it. ^^
Comment by jazmine16: Jul 21, 2008 11:45 pm
great,loved it!!
Comment by crystina8503: Aug 28, 2008 12:35 pm
SmileyAwesome!
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