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Ivannia

Thou wast everything to me,
for which my soul did pine.
A green isle in the sea Ivannia,
A fountain and a shrine.
All wreathed in fairy fruits and flowers,
Where all the flowers were mine.
A place a part, within this heart.
To keep you for all time.

note i may push a few verses inside this. this is just a practise.

by Sinnocence
posted on 06/13/2007

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Comment by kayla: Jun 13, 2007 4:41 am
really beautifulSmiley
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Jun 13, 2007 4:46 am
Wow! Truly beautiful! I wish I could vote it up a million times... but it only lets me do it once (damn!) so aww... LOL!! Vote up! Good poem!
Comment by footprints: Jun 13, 2007 5:07 am
I like the tone here - kind of enchanted.
Comment by tearsofrain: Jun 13, 2007 9:00 am
yeah. what they said.
sorry, can't really think of much to say right now, but this is idyllic, and like footprints said, very enchanted feeling
Comment by ragingquiet13: Jun 13, 2007 11:13 pm
i agree with footprints too its the wording u use tht makes u so good [lalala yea so i finally got wht u ment]i wish i could write like this well rite now i wish i could write at all lol [damn writers block sucks]neways great poem as all of urs r lol
[yes im jealous jk ]if i was i wouldnt comment but umm yea srry this is so long but im bored and feel like writing 1 thts long so here we go im going to babble ready? to bad...
why r all of ur titles in a different lang. or r they and if so wht lang. cuz its starting to bug me ? did u read my latest poem ?yes i finally got 1 out lolz its about love go figure rite umm so hows the vaca? u still there ?i could just message u and make this easier but easy isnt always fun !!O_o hehe btw u can answer all these questions in a message lol cuz im sure ur busy [and another reason im writing this on ur poem is becuz ppl have confersations on ppls poems and i dont understand them so now im part of 1] Yay!!!ok i think im done now this was fun [for me neway and yea so bye]~tt
Comment by ragingquiet13: Jun 13, 2007 11:15 pm
P.S CLEAN OUT YOUR DAMN MAILBOX!!!!!!!!!!!!!AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment by LoveLiesBleeding: Jun 14, 2007 12:39 am
Wow...what can I say...beautiful, as always...xXx
Comment by oldman: Jun 17, 2007 10:15 pm
Classic writing from an age thought dead. Nice melodic flow that sings and pulls the strings of my heart. The young master at work!
Comment by redandtwisted: Aug 28, 2008 10:50 pm
You never cease to amaze me =)
Comment by infidel: Sep 18, 2008 1:53 pm
wow
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