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incircled lies

incircled in your eye's
i can not escape
imprisoned in your lies
i began to suffocate

fallen victim to your love
fallen-i am your dove
mend these broken wings
untie the threaded strings

set me free of insanity
bless me with humanity
i've lost myself in today
pondering this midnight dismay

by hiddeninblood
posted on 04/29/2008

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Comment by emogothjen: Apr 30, 2008 12:30 pm
well, i think it is very good and i really like it. it's cute and you did a great job!
Comment by loveforeverlivelonger: Apr 29, 2008 4:50 pm
wow this is a good poem wow i like it alot wow i love all your poems no matter what santa even if you want critisism haha i don't know how to spell.
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Apr 30, 2008 9:16 am
this is a good poem but you misspelt incircled on the first line and you misspelt imprisoned. other then that it's all good.
Comment by bow16: Apr 30, 2008 1:09 pm
This a good poem...I like it's very good...I know how you feel cus thats how I feel...
Comment by meltedsnowman: Apr 30, 2008 6:13 pm
agree with all..
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