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In Love

A smile was pasted on his face while I talked to him,
we went at such a slow pace,
We were right on the rim.

I said, "You know what I love about you?"
He said "No."
And I said "Yeah, you do."
"Why don't you let me know?"

I said, " I love the way you smile,
how I know that you're so worth while,
how you twirl me around,
how my stomach gets turned upside down,
and as our lips meet,
in this wonderful bliss,
known to others as love,
but to us as kiss."

In turn he gestured towards me,
looked me in the eye
and guaranteed,
"I love the way you are,
how you hold my hand in the car,
how your eyes just glow,
and that lets me know,
how much you mean,
and when I get home,
I am so happy, you know,
I just want to scream."

So, as their conversation ended,
one thing was so true,
as they held hands and walked the streets,
we all soon realized,
one of them was you.

by GiveMeU
posted on 05/21/2008

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Comment by thatgirlyoucantforget: May 22, 2008 4:02 pm
that's so great!
awesome job (:
Comment by asdfyz: May 23, 2008 6:43 am
that poem is really good. I feel the same way about this one girl. I can easily relate to it and that adds soemthing to it.

Great job
Comment by asdfyz: May 23, 2008 6:44 am
that poem is really good. I feel the same way about this one girl. I can easily relate to it and that adds soemthing to it.

Great job
Comment by babytee33: May 23, 2008 6:59 am
That is so good. I love it!
Comment by unknowntruth1: May 23, 2008 7:38 am
yay for cute love peoms. great job Smiley
Comment by AngelicallyBroken: May 23, 2008 2:38 pm
awwww how cute,awesome poem!
Comment by babylove: May 23, 2008 3:11 pm
hey

omfg


this poem is amazing
Comment by sytycdlike3rinn: May 24, 2008 8:26 am
I really, really like this! Great writing!
Comment by GiveMeU: May 29, 2008 1:45 pm
thanks guys, I'm glad that you like it! Open smile
Comment by Holychild: May 29, 2008 2:15 pm
this is good. keep them coming.
God bless you and jesus is at your side.
Love&Peace:]
Comment by GiveMeU: Jun 3, 2008 5:47 pm
thank you
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