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If I Would You?

If I were drowning in the sea,
Wouldyou u jump rite in and save me?
If i was falling like a star,
would u be rite there to catch me?
If I was dreaming of your kiss,
would u look rite threw me?
If my heart was sadder than a song,
would u still listen?
If my teras fell on u one by one,
would u see them glisten?

by NOTsoBEAUTIFULLYbroken
posted on 05/29/2007

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Comment by chazie: May 29, 2007 10:08 am
aww cute
Comment by aCrazyApe: May 29, 2007 10:16 am
If you were drowning in the sea,
I would save you.
If you were falling like a star,
I would catch you.
If you were dreaming of my kiss,
Id make that dream come true.
If your heart was sadder than a song,
I would listen to it.
If you tears fell on me one by one,
I would see them glisten.

Sorry just had to write it.
Comment by NOTsoBEAUTIFULLYbroken: May 29, 2007 10:22 am
OMG have i told u i love u yet? cuz i do.
Comment by Darryn732: May 29, 2007 10:25 am
cool
Comment by Findingyou: May 29, 2007 10:28 am
aww..this poem is sweet and cool..
Comment by NOTsoBEAUTIFULLYbroken: May 29, 2007 10:32 am
tanks.
Comment by MorbidG: May 29, 2007 11:07 am
Awesome.
Comment by AngelFire: May 29, 2007 12:30 pm
great poem....really sweet....and positive...
Comment by KCFangel: Jun 1, 2007 10:09 am
ok fyi....(NOTsoBEAUTIFULLYbroken)&(aCrazyApe)...you guys are too cute together, or talking with all these comments and things i've read so far, and seriously i'm gunna cry just from reading this one....ur so lucky...both of you...and very nice poem btw and i'm glad to hear how much you love eachother, and crazyape, you answered these things and it honestly takes a real man to do something like that, and i think that's a great thing...i wish i knew someone like that, or should i say had someone like that...but anyways...nice job to NOTsoBEAUTIFULLYbroken, and i hope you guys are happy!! </3 angel
Comment by NOTsoBEAUTIFULLYbroken: Jun 6, 2007 10:22 am
we're not dating. we're not even friends. we are non exsistent. hes a fucking dink.
Comment by nickson104: Jun 6, 2007 1:08 pm
awesome poem i like it, loadsa good questions
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