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If I...

If I gave you roses enough,
could I convince you that life isn't so brutally tough?
Could the velvet petals erase the sorrows of past loves?
Could the aroma soothe the pain caused by false trusts?
Could the beauty smoothe the callouses on your heart's husk?
Could you dip the stem in ink,
and write a love poem, about us?

If I gave you the stars and I gave you the moon,
would it be enough to stop you from hurting you?
Would your starlight replace the need for a blade?
Could they stop the stress that makes you cause yourself pain?
Would the lunar glow pluck the seed from your mind,
before it sprouts into full blown suicide?

If for you, I gave my life up,
would it show you then, that I'm serious about us?
If I waited beyond life, a martyr for love,
would you follow me through, so we could rise above?

by SinnerIndeed
posted on 02/22/2008

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Comment by Poison: Feb 22, 2008 12:45 pm
Awwwwwwwwwww So prettyful.....*tear* And i would.
Comment by hiddeninblood: Feb 22, 2008 12:47 pm
this is awsome
Comment by virtualbubblewrap: Feb 22, 2008 3:11 pm
omg this is amazing its so true too wow great job Smiley
Comment by GiveMeU: Feb 22, 2008 3:49 pm
Wow! I love it! Wonderful poem. Great job. Open smile
Comment by crazyforcodymylove: Feb 22, 2008 7:04 pm
wow this is so beautiful!!! poison sure loves it!!
wow *sigh*.....
Comment by sassicat: Feb 23, 2008 8:20 am
Awww, that's really sweet! Wonderful poem.
Comment by InMyDreams: Feb 23, 2008 10:00 am
this poem is amazing, it makes me think how my boyfriend tries to help me sometimes,
i wish i could explain how good this poem really is, but to me it's just beyond the words to explain it
Comment by JennaJo: Feb 23, 2008 2:41 pm
I agree with the second part of the last comment. It's a powerful poem, and on a personal note, it reminds me of my boyfriend and I.
Comment by OverTheRainbow: Feb 24, 2008 7:07 am
This is a very well written poemSmiley Vote=Up)
Comment by amrg1822: Feb 24, 2008 7:57 pm
nice :] 5 stars! amazzzinng
Comment by aCrazyApe: Feb 25, 2008 11:20 am
Wow
This is very beautiful and a bit sad, but its PERFECT!!!
The rhymes and the flow are very very good
LOVE THIS POEM!!!!
Comment by Mangekyo: Feb 25, 2008 12:56 pm
once again.............ur work inspires me and i shall not let go to waste........sinnerindeed.......... you have talent here and i tell you to use it wisely and continue to express yourself.............
Comment by aqua4ever: Feb 25, 2008 6:44 pm
That is AMAZING i really want a guy like this. =] vote up.
POISION UR LUCKY.
Comment by meltedsnowman: Feb 26, 2008 9:41 am
intense..i very much agree with aqua4ever.
Comment by cryingblackblood: Feb 27, 2008 8:10 am
wow....thats amazing and all i can realy say is wow because this poem actually gave me tears...i'm glad there are still people out there who care for the ones they love
Comment by thestewardofgondor: Feb 27, 2008 9:43 am
wish i could say this what you say too
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: Feb 28, 2008 9:17 am
thats so sweet? not sweet. meanigful. it shows u care. people who cut need someone like that..
Comment by tobeloved: Mar 2, 2008 1:31 pm
i completely agree with BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters.
this an amazing poem.
Comment by ShatteredDeepWithin: Mar 3, 2008 1:02 pm
Wonderful poem! It is very touching and shows how much u truly care for her and her well-being!! great job!
Comment by Freewriter91: Mar 10, 2008 8:58 am
awesome poem good job
Comment by AngelIndeed: Mar 10, 2008 10:30 am
I love this..it is one of my favs well it is my FAV! I LOVE YOU!
Comment by lost2theWorld: Apr 25, 2008 1:32 pm
whoa. i totally love this!!!
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