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i wish

as day burns to night
as the moon climbs over the lonely mountains
and as the stars slowly blink to life.....

i wish you where here
here to hold me tight
to whisper so softly in my ear
'its okay, i'm here'......

i wish you where here
to gently wipe my tears and to tell me you love me....

i wish..
but wishes are just wishes
unless you wish this too?...

by meltedsnowman
posted on 04/17/2008

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Comment by kareohline012: Apr 19, 2008 1:20 pm
i like that poem, its awesome, its sad and i like the end, good job! Smiley
Comment by EdensApple91: Apr 17, 2008 9:18 pm
i wish this too,

it speaks to me Smiley
beautiful
Comment by hiddeninblood: Apr 18, 2008 9:28 am
my god this is an amazing poem...i love the last lines...
i wish..
but wishes are just wishes
unless you wish this too?...

i also wish this too...Smiley
Comment by Amiiee: Apr 19, 2008 8:31 am
i wish this too
beautiful poem =]
Comment by Amiiee: Apr 19, 2008 8:38 am
i wish this too
beautiful poem =]
Comment by missingmom: Apr 19, 2008 9:13 am
I think this is every persons wish....to love and be loved in return! Very good. Smiley
Comment by wwwdotcom: Apr 23, 2008 7:50 pm
that is in all our hearts
Comment by Tauntingviper: Apr 25, 2008 1:10 pm
we all wish for that, good work
Comment by Korn: Apr 28, 2008 6:22 pm
I agree with everyone we all wish...good job
Comment by ewallien: May 8, 2008 11:30 am
I really liked your poem. I agree that sometimes you just need someone to be there for you when you need them the most! NICE JOB!!!
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