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I Sure Hope You Know...

Can you see my sadness
The regretful things I do
The tears my eyes shed
And the face I only see, is you

You are my hero
The sounds of my heart
The thoughts in my mind
And the tape, that keeps me from falling apart

You are the shine in my eyes
And the light within my soul
Can't you just look and see
That you're my winning goal

You everything I got
And everything I'd ever hope for
And now nothing is like
It was ever before

Tears may fall
And fears may hide
But forever I'll love you
And I'll always keep you inside

Broken to pieces
Though I don't care
You'll always have my heart
Even though it doesn't seem fair

So please stay with me
And never let me go
Because you're all I need
I sure hope you know

by Tequilla
posted on 01/08/2008

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Comment by loveme77: Jan 8, 2008 3:49 pm
Wow. Sometimes, I feel just like that. Great job. Vote up
Comment by aqua4ever: Jan 8, 2008 4:29 pm
That is good. Lots of little errors though. But it is overall good.
Comment by Darryn732: Jan 8, 2008 6:35 pm
wow neat poem Smiley I like It
Comment by PrayForMe: Jan 8, 2008 8:24 pm
Love it Smiley
Comment by GiveMeU: Jan 14, 2008 8:30 am
Great poem! Open smile
Comment by sorrowfulsoul: Jan 16, 2008 6:07 pm
great job, vote up!
Comment by FlawsAndAll: Jan 19, 2008 11:36 pm
awwwww love is life's biggest gift to humans
Comment by moonlight: Jan 21, 2008 11:59 am
great!
Comment by Tequilla: Jan 28, 2008 12:22 pm
Thnx =)
Comment by tigerlily: Feb 6, 2008 12:20 am
i really like your poems and can relate to them. i feel like we have the same style of writing. you also have good titles haha im definetly bad at thinking up those...
Comment by tobeloved: Mar 3, 2008 11:23 am
wow.. great poem, i like it, keep on writing =)
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