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i cannot surrender

turn off the lights and let soft tunes fill the silence,
darkness consumes the room yet, our bodies find eachother,
laying you down i charge onto your body,undressing you slowly, kissing parts that expose,
so anxious to feel all that you behold,
playful thoughts keep filing my head and exiting my body,
wishing time wont expire while we explore this adventure,
hoping reality wont set, pushing all disturbances aside,
i wont waste a single second i savor evry tick of the clock,
holding on to that last touch , that last instance, that last glance, that last scent , and the last memory , im holding on unable to let go, but so desperate to let go.. i cannot surrender! not yet..

by Pleasurefull
posted on 05/11/2008

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Comment by AFireInYourEyes18: May 12, 2008 8:25 am
wow... very nice... hmm... ii know what you mean =)... just wow
Comment by sadeyesgirl: May 12, 2008 10:08 am
i am loving ur poetry
great job Smiley
Comment by mysterygrl: May 12, 2008 11:50 am
thats a good poem!
Comment by msyesenia: May 13, 2008 10:10 am
cute
Comment by NeVeRmOrE: May 13, 2008 6:44 pm
nice
Comment by jackohearts: May 14, 2008 7:17 am
It is nice to see you put emotions and feelings out for others to see. good job
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