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Holding on

I try to see

I try to understand

I try to listen

To talk

To trust

Knowing the whole world wants you

Me included too my boo

I need you so much more

My heroine, my medication

Take away my pain

Show me the world in a different light

Show me a world full of happiness, of light

Instead of this world of darkness i live in now

Is it to much to ask?

I lay down to sleep

My angel watching

Holding on

Hoping to wake to a better day

A better world

by AFireInYourEyes18
posted on 05/01/2008

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Comment by drkromance: May 6, 2008 2:21 pm
It's beautiful.
Comment by singlegirl: May 6, 2008 2:32 pm
thats awesome poem
Comment by HeartlessAngel: May 6, 2008 10:32 am
Amazing poem.
Comment by tobeloved: May 4, 2008 3:46 pm
i like it..really good! great job!
Comment by SexyDezy: May 4, 2008 1:16 pm
Wow i love is its so true
Comment by duhdude18: May 6, 2008 8:49 pm
your poem is great.
i felt your emotion.
ive gone through something
like this. anyways
good job. keep writing ^^
Comment by poemsarebliss: May 1, 2008 10:22 am
u sure aren't alone...very well written poem..
Comment by Breathexxforxxme: May 1, 2008 7:49 am
Wow this is a really good poem... you know i think about it ... about the meaning of this poem and i realize that i am basically the same way... so with that being said you are not alone...
Comment by DarkAngel692008: May 1, 2008 12:16 pm
yupp i agrere with everyone your not alone Smiley
Comment by MyMisery: May 1, 2008 2:26 pm
even though it just came to u i love it
Comment by lbrnware: May 1, 2008 2:57 pm
this is a really great poem. And I certainly agree you are not alone.

lebe
Comment by Waterblaze3234: May 2, 2008 5:23 am
i feel the same way. really good job
Comment by kaylasheray: May 2, 2008 7:07 am
aaww thats really cute.. totally know how that feels
Comment by emsue11392: May 2, 2008 10:15 am
Im going through the exact same thing with my ex boyfriend!!!
thats really good!!!
comment mine please!!!
Comment by coldfire146: May 2, 2008 12:41 pm
i love your poem
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