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hold me, just hold me

caress me with your poisionous touch
and sweep me from heaven's gates
crush me with your lustful clutch
leave me in this fraglie state

my sweet angel hold me,just hold me
i fear this thought of free falling
it's the very reason i could never belive
i only understand this instinct for crawling

i can see the shadows in the night
they speak to me of forgotten nights
night's when my battles were lost
and I engulfed in sweet chaos

sweet angel of mine
hold me, just hold me
tell me i'm fine
hold me and set me free

by hiddeninblood
posted on 04/07/2008

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Comment by childOFtheNIGHT: Apr 8, 2008 6:33 am
very good Smiley luv ur poemz
voting up
Comment by dakotadarcy: Apr 8, 2008 7:25 am
Great Poem..x
Comment by fallenangel6636: Apr 8, 2008 7:55 am
:0 wow
Comment by meltedsnowman: Apr 8, 2008 8:16 am
agree^^^ terrific
Comment by DeadMoonChild: Apr 8, 2008 9:57 am
beautifulSmiley
Comment by bow16: Apr 8, 2008 11:04 am
I only have one word for this poem...Beautiful....
Comment by MyLittleHeartIsBroken: Apr 8, 2008 11:51 am
Its beautiful!!Keep up the good work=)
Comment by bloodypaintedart: Apr 8, 2008 12:17 pm
I love the way you worded this poem. My style to read!!!!
Comment by dakotadarcy: Apr 8, 2008 1:48 pm
I Like your poem very much, its very powerful! xx
Comment by bloodypaintedart: Apr 8, 2008 3:39 pm
I love the way you worded this poem. My style to read!!!!
Comment by bobbi28: Apr 8, 2008 8:36 pm
wow i really liked it.
Comment by brokenXbruisedXbleeding: Apr 8, 2008 11:16 pm
this is really good. i like it
Comment by xcrabsxrxnotxfoodx: Apr 9, 2008 7:11 am
that's very sweet.
Comment by unknown: Apr 9, 2008 9:51 am
great poem.
Comment by Waterblaze3234: Apr 9, 2008 10:55 am
lol again sweet bliss to read such talent great job!
Comment by EmoBabyGurL: Apr 9, 2008 2:18 pm
OMG I LOVE IT!!!
Comment by kartracergurl14: Apr 9, 2008 7:23 pm
Wounderful poem.
Comment by XneurotoxicX: Apr 10, 2008 7:32 am
this is really good.
Comment by dark1angel2: Apr 10, 2008 7:42 am
wow i love this poem its so sweet! it describes how i feel with my boyfriend!
Comment by HeartlessShadow: Apr 10, 2008 10:36 pm
Very good poem
Shows very deep feelings Smiley
Comment by BrittanyLafoe: Apr 11, 2008 8:04 am
awesome
Comment by aCrazyApe: Apr 11, 2008 10:07 am
This is very very awesome
first stanza blew me away
Though you spelled chaos wrong
Thats a minor error
Still i rank this 11 outta 10
voting up
Comment by MsKeys1707: Apr 11, 2008 11:28 am
this is really good
I agree with the above commentsSmiley
Greatly written
Comment by BlindfollowerSS: Apr 11, 2008 11:57 pm
Feelings here run deep I like that. Keep it up.
Comment by leadme2temptation: Apr 12, 2008 10:12 am
i loved it, it just seems like there is so many hidden meanings behind what your really saying....or that just may be what i'm getting out of it or experiences from my life, but it's good
Comment by Weltt: Apr 12, 2008 5:24 pm
Nicely done!
Comment by fallenangelx14: Apr 12, 2008 6:21 pm
woah. amazing nicely done it's beautiful
Comment by watelse2say: Apr 16, 2008 7:14 am
haha koool
Comment by dark1angel2: Apr 16, 2008 10:01 am
ggggggggrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment by EdensApple91: Apr 17, 2008 7:39 pm
i think its sweet :]
Comment by GoldenHearts: Apr 19, 2008 7:55 am
Very nice job!! Keep up the great work!!
Comment by Danielle11: Apr 20, 2008 3:20 pm
WOW!! NICE!
Comment by RayneSong: Apr 21, 2008 2:11 pm
Lovely Open smile Very bittersweet and passionate. Open smile
Comment by hiddeninblood: Apr 22, 2008 11:37 am
thank you guys for all the comments...Smiley
Comment by Tauntingviper: Apr 25, 2008 1:07 pm
this is great, i love it
Comment by Korn: Apr 26, 2008 12:49 pm
WOW I'm impressed
Comment by asdfyz: Apr 28, 2008 8:29 am
wow that Is haunting but amazing!
Comment by Soulmate99: May 2, 2008 7:08 am
awww <3 i like this alot
Comment by clinxi: May 11, 2008 6:02 am
love it
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