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held in love #1

Why wont she accept me, what

did i do, she wont even pay

to look at me, im no different

then you, why wont she talk to

me, why wont i talk to her,why

cant i just let it out be me

be myself around her, She has

me traped in a web of

confustion, what do i do.

Should i ask her to the dance?

Should i leave her be and not

know what could of been im so

confused. Help.

by Deeplyinspired
posted on 12/31/1969

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Comment by Deeplyinspired: Jan 19, 2007 1:59 pm
is it stupid lol
Comment by InMyDreams: Jan 19, 2007 4:11 pm
uhh... yea it is stupid... jk lol- its another good one Sticking tongue out just do wat u gotta do lol
Comment by scorpio: Jan 20, 2007 8:17 am
Hey i thot this poem is kinda cute in a way. its an intresting msg, good questions. and i really dont think its stupid. its a good attempt
Comment by cami: Jan 26, 2007 5:50 pm
hm you have no life b/c you write poetry.. lol jkkk <3 haha good poem
Comment by InMyDreams: Jan 28, 2007 7:49 pm
omg u go cami! lol <3
Comment by xwhisperingxanglex: Jan 31, 2007 1:57 pm
awww! you should tlk to her...thats how my bf acted w/ me until he got to kno me...
Comment by LuciferHasFallen: Feb 5, 2007 6:20 am
its cute!
Comment by lazbleach: Feb 8, 2007 4:13 pm
okay well this time ur poem is in the shape of a rectangle good work!
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Comment by LoveLiesBleeding: Feb 14, 2007 3:35 am
This is really good, I love how you write!!
Comment by BirD: Feb 14, 2007 10:52 am
i like this poem, it's good and i like how you wrote it!
Comment by aCrazyApe: Feb 15, 2007 1:33 pm
I love the way you wrote this poem. You can really relate to this poem.
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