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gentle whispers

hearing your gentle whispers soothe my aching soul
i heard every single one
i wonder how you keep control
when you are my moon and my
sun

you take away my darkness
while breathing sunshine into my life
i don't know what i'd do if you pick back up that knife
i'd probaly watch and point as you engulf yourself in that pool of madness
while you leave me dwidling in this constant sadness

i want you to know i am here for you this girl i truely dont know
she's got me at the edge of my seat with every single show
she's got me craving for every lyric of her sweet poetry
we are both two people trying to make it through this dark open sea

i'll be here cause i see you are just like me
having constant battles out in the open sea
we are no diferent,just here and there
but that's what makes this so clear

i want to whisper this into your ear
i want to hold you, so you'll never have to fear
i want to feel my heartbeat slowly come to a stop
and watch as our tears no longer drop



by hiddeninblood
posted on 03/25/2008

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Comment by tobeloved: Mar 25, 2008 5:13 pm
wow.. really good. you expressed yourself well. keep writing =)
Comment by gaara: Mar 26, 2008 6:42 am
i love it i agree with Mackenzie up in there its a really good poem and i like it Sticking tongue out keep up the good work. Smiley
Comment by bow16: Mar 26, 2008 10:52 am
Amazing...I love it...It's deep in a very sweet way...I love the way you write...you put in a way as if we are there and see what you feel and want...
Comment by TexasSaint: Mar 26, 2008 1:15 pm
wow this is really good i think i can relate to it.nice poem Smiley
Comment by phantomhearts: Mar 26, 2008 3:38 pm
wow...very very good poem...Smiley
Comment by TheLastGentleMen: Mar 26, 2008 3:58 pm
This is a great poem...
Comment by kadcbn69: Mar 26, 2008 4:24 pm
WOW this poem is great...your great at them!!!
Comment by crazyforcodymylove: Mar 26, 2008 6:52 pm
OMG THIS IS WOW........truthfully i am speechless this is a poem that has so much beauty in it wow i love it
it is great! wow i am amazed wow i......wow this is wwwwwwwwwwwwooooooooooooowwwwww!!!!
I am totally voting up!!
Comment by crazyforcodymylove: Mar 26, 2008 8:35 pm
Man this poem is really really great!!!!!
Comment by danielle: Mar 27, 2008 2:51 am
nice
Comment by emogothjen: Mar 27, 2008 12:25 pm
wow. my god man, that's great. i love it and obviously ur really sweet and that's very very good. great job.
Comment by tearsofrain: Mar 27, 2008 4:23 pm
this actually reminds me a lot of something i went through once, as cliche as that sounds.
this is really nice, and i was honestly pleasantly surprised.
Comment by Reeses: Mar 31, 2008 4:37 am
this is really good
Comment by Pimpin101: Mar 31, 2008 11:02 pm
very very nice!
Comment by Reeses: Apr 1, 2008 4:35 am
nice
Comment by AFireInYourEyes18: Apr 1, 2008 5:53 am
yeaza... i like it..
Comment by meltedsnowman: Apr 4, 2008 9:43 am
ummm...omg..im speechless..and amazed..and wow...this is now my favorite..i love it. its so simple, but with such a hidden meaning..wow...seriously..this is your best..wow
Comment by meltedsnowman: Apr 4, 2008 9:44 am
re-read it..now im crying..its so beutifull..**sniffle**
Comment by xmxixsxtxy: Apr 4, 2008 11:06 am
nice
Comment by xcrabsxrxnotxfoodx: Apr 11, 2008 7:48 am
that's the narliest poem ever, i feel like crying.. don't ever stop writing
Comment by kaylasheray: May 2, 2008 7:18 am
i really like this poem...
it has alot of REAL emotion in it and thats what makes a poem good
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