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Four Words

For so long, I had felt alone,
beaten, crying, out in the cold,
how could someone say they love me and go?
Twisted my heart,
turned me into something unknown,
I became what hurt me,
an abuser of most,
like a parasite jumping,
from host to host,
until it enveloped,
and changed who I was,
I lost myself,
forgot how to love.


Then they came,
two girls not one,
in to my life,
oh how my world spun.
Mother and daughter,
the old me recoiled,
don't want a family,
relationship spoiled.

Four words to change me,
simple and pure,
four words that saved me,
made me secure,
"I love you" so simple,
that's what three of them were,
the fourth one was "Daddy"
and it shook me to the core.

Fairytale endings are fake,
so I won't give you that speech,
but happy new begginings are real,
and it lays right at my feet.
Now I have a family,
in which I love to be,
so I write now in remembrance,
of the four words that changed me.

by SinnerIndeed
posted on 04/04/2008

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Comment by lbrnware: May 6, 2008 1:44 pm
I loved every word in this poem, you really have a gift.

lbrnware
Comment by Breathexxforxxme: Jun 19, 2008 8:22 am
Wow!! you sure do have a realy pure and true talent for poetry i really like this poem and you've kept me reading on of your poetry...
i love your poetry...
and this one was Truely Amazing!
i give it a 10
Comment by AngelIndeed: Apr 4, 2008 9:53 am
Awwwwwwwww gosh you made me cry again you bitch! Lol We love you baby!
Comment by meltedsnowman: Apr 4, 2008 10:06 am
awsome!Smiley
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: Apr 4, 2008 10:15 am
awwww Smiley
Comment by AngelIndeed: Apr 4, 2008 10:41 am
Had to read it again! I love it.
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Apr 4, 2008 11:10 am
great poem
Comment by xxilovetohatetoloveyouxx: Apr 4, 2008 12:42 pm
awwwww
Comment by kayla: Apr 4, 2008 12:53 pm
very well written. Great poem.
Comment by andypandy114: Apr 4, 2008 2:06 pm
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Comment by urabaka: Apr 6, 2008 10:45 pm
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Comment by Smoovekatz: Apr 8, 2008 12:01 am
Beautiful!
Comment by hiddeninblood: Apr 8, 2008 8:38 am
fantistic poem...
Comment by JenniferLynne: Apr 8, 2008 11:13 am
Your poem gave me the chills! I love it!
Comment by Reeses: Apr 12, 2008 3:15 pm
i love this poem its really good
Comment by AngelIndeed: Apr 17, 2008 9:08 am
HAd to read it again <3
Comment by DarkAngel692008: Apr 28, 2008 10:47 am
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Comment by childOFtheNIGHT: Apr 29, 2008 6:31 am
omg! this is just...im speechless..itz so good!!
Comment by BEAUTIFULPHATMAMA: Jun 29, 2008 7:10 pm
I LIKE YOUR POEM ITS FROM THE HEART
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