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Forever

Smile; frown
Sing; Cry
Celebrate; Mourn
And something in between that I can’t describe
All I know is that he’s been hurt
and that’s all that seems to matter.
Perhaps it is my own folly
for I chained my heart to his
and now his pain is my own.
My love is like gravity
Unseen but always there.
I wish that I could be his comfort
to take away all his pain
But he would never love me
He would only turn away.
So here in my silence I will stay

Forever with you
Forever without you
Forever watching
Forever unwatched
Forever wanting
Forever unwanted
Forever in love
Forever unloved

Forever

by moonlightmage
posted on 02/19/2007

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Comment by thefadingscene: Feb 19, 2007 8:42 pm
wow. very very heartfelt.
very well written.
Comment by TheDarkShadow: Feb 19, 2007 8:52 pm
but but but but but!!!

i love you christina!!!!

lol....i like this poem
Comment by crazyforsure: Feb 19, 2007 9:04 pm
this poem is great
Comment by tearsofrain: Feb 19, 2007 9:06 pm
1) interesting u classified cry and sing as opposites...
2)who can say how we feel for him...
3)luv thegravity methaphor. perfect. chained love. been there... definetly need to discuss that one ^.~
4) ending equals dynamite
Comment by tearsofrain: Feb 19, 2007 9:08 pm
jay i dont think this is about u >.<
Comment by TheDarkShadow: Feb 19, 2007 9:31 pm
i know....lol...i just like to make it seem that way ^_^

he he....im a weird one ~_^
Comment by moonlightmage: Feb 20, 2007 8:49 am
No kibby, its not about you >.<
But I love you any way!!! ~.^

and yes we do need to discuss it =) thx for the comments
Comment by aCrazyApe: Feb 20, 2007 12:42 pm
good poem i really like the gravity metaphor.
Comment by Reece: Feb 20, 2007 9:48 pm
'tearsofrain' Allways says the thing i want to say lol, so Sticking tongue out good work keep it up!
Comment by Styrmwolf: Feb 21, 2007 5:59 am
Wow, very powerful and emotive
Comment by SisterofDarkness: Feb 21, 2007 3:02 pm
I love it!!!! I LOVE IT!!! Mwahahaaa!!! I WILL EAT IT!!!... wait, eat it??? nooo, I don't think so...just admire it...I LOVE IT!!! Sticking tongue out
Comment by undefinedlove: Feb 28, 2007 2:50 pm
This is.. Amazing.
Your words are similar to what I think at times; like you can put my feelings into words.
Never stop writing. You have a gift.
Comment by undefinedlove: Feb 28, 2007 2:52 pm
This is.. Amazing.
Your words are similar to what I think at times; like you can put my feelings into words.
Never stop writing. You have a gift.
Comment by undefinedlove: Feb 28, 2007 2:53 pm
It's so amazing, it double-posted!
Oh, as a side-note, I want to say that your reference to gravity was very creative. It really suited the purpose and got the point out there.
.. Will you autograph my wenis?!
Comment by moonlightmage: Mar 1, 2007 6:26 pm
Thanx and of course I'll autography your wenis!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

<3
Comment by qdmi523: Apr 6, 2007 2:14 pm
i love this poem! my name's christina to=)!
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