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Finding Happiness(complete)

verse 1)
Through all the hippocracy
and times of adversity
Still I'm ducking and dodging
To avoid my fallacies
Always striving and trying
to avoid catastrophy
Fighting an unfair world
For what makes me happy

(Chorus)
Finding my happiness
Searching for my dream
But I can't escape the darkness
that haunts me in my sleep
Looking for the piece
thats missing my my heart
Waiting incomplete
Slowly falling apart

(verse 2)
Im slowly dying inside
Patiently waiting for you
Only this smile outside
Hides what still remains untrue
But I will not wish to die
Because my time is not through
Til the day I die, I'll wait
For my dream to come true

(chorus)

(verse 3)
No more will I silence my cries
Because no longer they exist
No longer locked inside
Opened with just one kiss
Didn't have to search for you
Didn,t know happiness was this
Through all Ive been through
My path led me to bliss

(chorus 2)
I've found my happiness
And my dreams found me
I've escaped the darkness
Now begins a new reality
Placed the piece
Missing in my lonely heart
Now I'm here complete
And I'll never fall apart

by aCrazyApe
posted on 01/30/2008

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Comment by HeartlessAngel: Jan 30, 2008 11:39 am
this is great
Comment by teardrops: Jan 30, 2008 6:12 pm
OH MY F'N GOD!!!! this is a really good song! I LOVE IT!!!! TOTALLY VOTEING UP!!!!
Comment by Penny: Jan 31, 2008 12:15 am
Dude...major props. as paula would say "touchdown!" haha.
Comment by patches: Feb 1, 2008 12:07 pm
wow. you were right. i love this. it really touches my heart because im experiencing/have experienced a situation with similar feelings..someone very close to me is semi-comatose and im just waiting for her to wake up. waiting for her kiss. and as long as there's a chance of her waking up, i'll wait. thanks for asking me to read this, it really got me. Smiley
Comment by Snoman: Feb 1, 2008 1:35 pm
hella good dude!!!
if i'm not mistaken u did change the last line of the chorus but right now i can't remeber...
ummm yeah i like the extra verse u put in, that was good.
i think i'm reading the last line wrong cause i can't seem to say it in a way that flows for me but knowing u it's fine. next time i come over you'll have to read it... or sing it Sticking tongue out so i can see how it's supposed to go Smiley
Comment by Snoman: Feb 1, 2008 1:37 pm
oh and maybe for the very last line depending on how you read it...
i'd put
"Now i'm here complete
And i'll never fall apart"

like i said though you'll have to read it so i can see how u make it flow. i'm getting an idea of how it goes slowly on my own but ima need ur help Sticking tongue out
Comment by forevergone1790: Feb 8, 2008 9:50 am
i agree with all comments... very good!!!
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Feb 14, 2008 2:28 am
Very good. I like it. Voting up! Smiley
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