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Feel You

There's so many miles between us
How do I feel you by my side?
You have that way of touching me
That makes me feel so alive

I touch you with the whispers
I send everyday with the breeze
and I know that you whisper back my hope
by way of the dancing leaves

Every dream you are with me
Walking slowly in the sand
All those nights I wake up
Reaching out for your hand

In my mind I embrace you
and hold you whilst we cry
this pain brought us together
across endless acres of sky

At night my face is lit
By a moon that you gave light
Guiding through the rough terrain
Even on the darkest night

In the day the sun shines
its smile warm down on me
and I know that you are with me here
I feel but I cannot see

I long to hear your voice
Softly whispering in my ear
And feel the racing in my heart
Everytime that you come near

If you held me in your arms
surrounded me in your embrace
all my fears would melt away
when I looked up at your face

I'd brush the hair from your face
To see the most beautiful eyes
Feel your breath upon my lips
For without your kiss I will die

I close my eyes and reach for you
fingers entwined in your hair
but I open my eyes to see emptiness
I feel you but you are not there

I too open my eyes to find you gone
I still feel your body against mine
Even though you are not with me now
You my love, I will one day find

And when you find me
I will feel you true
like I feel this pain inside me
that pain will end with you

by Brandon
posted on 10/18/2008

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Comment by copenboy: Oct 23, 2008 12:31 pm
this is some good stuff
Comment by hollygirl: Oct 19, 2008 7:01 am
Wow this so unbelievable. You two sound so in love. Brill on the collaboration
Comment by asdfyz: Oct 18, 2008 8:34 pm
very cool. I like thw style and you two are great writers. Beautiful writing if not a bit bland in your stanza design (always ABCB rhyme). I like it.
And i do have to say, in my time on this site, i have never heard of a collabo. It is a first and I like it. Great work.
Comment by lostangel: Oct 19, 2008 6:45 am
This is the most amazing thing I have seen. You two are the definition of synergistic.
Comment by XxXBleedingRosexXx: Nov 14, 2008 7:54 pm
This is my favortie line
"I touch you with the whispers
I send everyday with the breeze
and I know that you whisper back my hope
by way of the dancing leaves"

Really good=]
Comment by XxXBleedingRosexXx: Nov 12, 2008 8:00 pm
I love,LOVE this poem. I love this line the most. It made me say " Wow he's a really good writer"

"I touch you with the whispers
I send everyday with the breeze
and I know that you whisper back my hope by way of the dancing leaves"
Comment by tearsofpain: Oct 20, 2008 9:37 pm
Beautiful expression of love between two people. I have never seen this done. Very romantic work.
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Oct 20, 2008 1:24 pm
Amazing write! Simply wonderful and lovely.
Comment by SmilingTragedy: Oct 18, 2008 1:53 pm
i love this. youre an amazing poet. seems to me like you are a little on the romance side.lol. keep writing. it helps inspire me. lol.
Comment by Selene: Oct 18, 2008 2:04 pm
I love reading this. Writing with you is so special :]
Comment by gabriella: Oct 18, 2008 2:58 pm
Amazing... simply amazing. You two should write together all the time.
Comment by flipsanity: Oct 18, 2008 4:05 pm
This is a great poem.

You two are amazing writers
Comment by Sarahsmile: Oct 18, 2008 6:04 pm
Beautiful collaboration..You two are spectacular. I love both of them
Comment by burningheart: Oct 19, 2008 8:56 am
You two make an excellent pairing. Good work... I love it
Comment by InMyDreams: Oct 19, 2008 9:31 am
I love this poem. It's amazing, that you could share this feeling and write it..
I really like it all, but i love this
"I touch you with the whispers
I send everyday with the breeze
and I know that you whisper back my hope
by way of the dancing leaves"

Comment by darkangel111: Oct 19, 2008 7:30 pm
great poem
Comment by crystalball: Oct 19, 2008 7:50 pm
You two are magnificent together. I have never seen anything as romantic as what is going on here. I love your work.
Comment by TearsofAcid: Oct 19, 2008 8:08 pm
You two capture the meaning of love. Wonderful poem. I am moved by the romance.
Comment by blackheart: Oct 20, 2008 9:46 am
This is a beautiful love story... I love it
Comment by Mangekyo: Oct 20, 2008 1:08 pm
amazingly done with the greatest confidence i've ever seen...great work you two
Comment by vason: Oct 20, 2008 11:59 pm
super
Comment by findmeinvisible: Oct 21, 2008 4:27 pm
its really good!!!!
Comment by bluepetals: Oct 22, 2008 4:20 pm
so pretty...
Comment by candy: Oct 24, 2008 8:20 pm
wow your very talented i LOVE this poem. keep writing =]
Comment by matt23: Oct 25, 2008 4:13 am
What a great idea, you two work very well together.
Comment by trilogy: Oct 26, 2008 7:52 pm
Excellent flow between you two. love it
Comment by cruelheart: Oct 26, 2008 8:10 pm
Great work... You two are amazing
Comment by cutiepie: Oct 28, 2008 10:30 am
wow u 2 r amazing, sounds like ur soul mates, u 2 r very lucky to have such talents i envy u, keep up the great workSmiley
Comment by BlackRose: Oct 30, 2008 10:39 am
really good
Comment by SPAGACKULA: Oct 30, 2008 3:16 pm
You don't have to ask me,Count me in,I'm joining the Club,Super Dynomite Excellent Work!! Your Masterpieces are with words of gold.I'm a Fan.A poem don't get any better than this one in my opinion.
Comment by SHAWNSBUTTERCUP4E4L: Oct 31, 2008 12:53 am
love the poem
Comment by watever76: Nov 1, 2008 11:10 pm
wow beautiful peom
Comment by OneBrokenHeart: Nov 2, 2008 6:59 am
Amazing keep it up alright. ~~~> Kangdee, Poet of broken dreams
Comment by xxjennalewxx: Nov 8, 2008 8:24 pm
your writing is amazing!
Comment by gothinlove: Nov 10, 2008 6:25 pm
Amazing work, the two of you are an amazing couple.
Comment by gevalyn: Nov 14, 2008 10:58 am
Are you two a couple?
Comment by itsreallymesalads: Nov 16, 2008 2:33 pm
soo much love put into this poem, it makes you want the feeling
Comment by DarkCobra: Nov 26, 2008 5:38 pm
awww
Comment by EmOtIoNaL: Nov 21, 2008 12:56 pm
this is very touching. i really like your way with words!!
Comment by Tinkerbellpixie: Nov 22, 2008 7:15 pm
another job well done by Brandon and Selene!!! bravo!
Comment by momochi: Dec 2, 2008 3:36 pm
thats really great
Comment by Sabra: Dec 6, 2008 9:50 pm
wow, that's awesome. amazing writing.
Comment by lonelygal: Dec 12, 2008 6:13 pm
I wish I was like that. Great poem
Comment by jygztur: Dec 16, 2008 8:06 am
amazing
Comment by LittleNikki: Dec 17, 2008 1:56 pm
i wish i was as great of a writer as you two are. this poem is truly amazing.
Comment by DD123: Dec 22, 2008 8:45 pm
Great work. Very creative. I enjoy reading a nice poem that comes straight from the heart, really makes you enjoy literature that much more.
Comment by JAn3kA: Jan 16, 2009 10:05 am
ITS GOOD
Comment by Chrason: Mar 16, 2009 2:56 pm
I tried explaining my full reaction to this poem to selene. But i really share something within this poem. Ive been there and felt like that, and i love the way its portrayed by you two. The problem lies in the pain that followed in my own personal experiences.
Beautifully expressed though, your both really good and I enjoy your collaborations.
Comment by SmilingTragedy: Jul 9, 2009 8:57 pm
THis Is THe Way I fELf WIth A GUy i Was TaLKin TO 4 Four MonthS. I CraVed HIm DaIly. I GOt Up EvERY MoRniNg Jus To Read HIs Txts. I nEw i haD A ReaSon TO Be HEre One More Day ON THis PlanEt. BUt I lOVe iTSmiley
x0Xoxox0Smiley
SmILIngTraGedy
Comment by Angelsvoice: Jun 6, 2009 4:38 pm
wow...im sitting at home crying because of this haha. its silly for me really...and omigoodness you are both such talented writers dont ever stop.
Comment by carlaparedes: Sep 10, 2009 1:51 pm
i love this poem is so sweet love it love it
Comment by duhdude18: Oct 21, 2009 3:41 am
excellent!!!!
Comment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: Nov 16, 2009 10:34 am
coolie
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