Fears Allayed

Mediocre.

I'm sorry but you can do better.

It's not bad! But it's definitely not good...

You could have organized in a more interesting manner, or perhaps used some sort of literary devices. You used colorful language, and wrote articulately and interestingly. However this is more of a stream of thought than a poem. Now I know poetry can sometimes be just that, however it's lacking that sparkle that makes great poetry. Now don't get me wrong, this would be a BEAUTIFUL letter to send to someone, and I'm sure if I was the recipient I would think it was absolutely perfect. However I am not... So I will simply speak as a writer, and with my own opinion. But anyway like I said, well written, but not a great poem. Of course that's only my opinion.

~John

I love how you wrote a poem responging to my poem. It's very cute. I miss you and what ifs still croud my mind but I believe in this relationship. I can't wait for another 3 weeks to pass by, so I can hold you in my arms again.