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erasing the gray

i can tell by the tears that you need a friend
i'll surely never stop if you think it's the end
i could never pay you back for what you've done for me
erasing the gray and allowing me to breathe
your my greatest joy, handed from the sky
i know this isn't fake,by the look in your eye

by unknown
posted on 04/19/2008

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Comment by kayla: Apr 20, 2008 11:07 am
Very good, nice flow and rhymeSmiley
Comment by kareohline012: Apr 19, 2008 2:16 pm
its good, i like it a lot
Comment by chazie: Apr 19, 2008 3:10 pm
aww Smiley this is really sweet! good job
Comment by loveforeverlivelonger: Apr 20, 2008 5:40 pm
wow this is really good
Comment by MechanicalAnimal: Apr 20, 2008 12:49 pm
Brilliant poem. Love the name and the way it's used in the poem. Great rhyming too. Love it.
Comment by moonlightbroken: Apr 21, 2008 5:42 am
this is very very good
i really love it
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