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Ecstasy in a Kiss

What can I compare
To what our kiss is
Joyful, blissful
Like a drug is
But our drug is free
Nothing can take it
So long as you're with me
I will feel this
And no negative consequence
Can come from our kiss
And kisses don't run out
Nor do they finish
So forever we'll feel
This endless bliss
Guess dreams do come true
And so do wishes

by aCrazyApe
posted on 04/16/2008

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Comment by broken3heart3: May 5, 2008 2:59 pm
but then your dreams crash and die when that once love leaves you in the dirt to bleed until you cant feel what pain can bring any longer. love doesnt exist but it is rather a slow hidden pain crossed with that escasy that you'll be using just to erase the memory of all living beings close to you...
Comment by meltedsnowman: Apr 16, 2008 10:30 am
wish i had something like that..good luck and good poem
Comment by brokenXbruisedXbleeding: Apr 16, 2008 3:47 pm
meltedsnowman said it all..
Comment by Snoman: Apr 18, 2008 9:32 am
um... not quite as good as i had wanted... i remember seeing something like this from another one of your poems...

comparing love or a kiss to a drug... i'm not sure which one...
we were gonna use it to write that song Crazy in Love

you're my drug my one addiction

or something like that...
but yeah it's pretty good... still looking for that emotional connection i got from your better poems... you write about your physical elements in your poems now...
i'm looking for emotions... cause i really enjoyed your poems when love was a feeling... not an action...
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