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Dream

Down on one knee he took her hand
The smile on her face just like he planed
He takes out the ring with his shaking hands
This is when it really begins

He opens it up the case and takes out the ring
He remembers the first time they started messaging
His first friend in so many years
The feelings inside him could bring him to tears

He opens his mouth but nothing comes out
“Will you marry me” his heart starts to shout
Looking up at her into her breath taking eyes
He knows in there is where his future lays

He takes a deep breath and asks her to marry him
A yes is whispered and light shines upon them
He swoops her up and kisses her softly
Knowing that she is his makes him all fuzzy

Back in the present he is sitting in his room
In front of his computer hoping one day to be her groom
Waiting for her respond
Wondering how to tell her he has loved her so long

by Acheron
posted on 10/23/2009

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Comment by darknessofcrows: Oct 24, 2009 12:33 am
Very sweet, mon ami.
Smiley
Very good.
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Oct 23, 2009 11:14 pm
This is something worth dreaming for, Sean, and I hope that one day this all works out for you and your dream girl *smiles* it's really sweet Smiley
Comment by darknessofcrows: Oct 24, 2009 12:33 am
votes up
Comment by waterwitch: Oct 24, 2009 7:22 am
nice, a true 'love story'.
Comment by Fathom: Oct 24, 2009 10:44 pm
so cute! And again, great!
Comment by deep: Oct 25, 2009 8:38 am
all of us are dreaming to have a true love story which will end with* will you marry me*......

truthful and hurtful as well..

thanx Acheron for this hard stuff **
Comment by LunaGetsuna: Oct 25, 2009 7:58 am
Awwww, this is adorable sean!
Comment by SaaraLawliet: Oct 25, 2009 7:05 am
so beautiful Smiley
Comment by Odesious: Nov 15, 2009 12:31 am
I like it so much i don't realy have any words to describe how i feel.
Comment by lexxie2323: Oct 24, 2009 11:27 am
aww sean this is an amazing poem, wow
Comment by Woobsie: Oct 25, 2009 8:12 pm
i love thisss.. so sweeeet..
Comment by deathsmessanger: Oct 26, 2009 11:05 am
Oh my gosh, this is so sweet!
I love it.
You are an awesome writter sean. Open smile
Comment by cocosbaby10: Oct 27, 2009 12:46 pm
I love it.
Comment by cocosbaby10: Oct 27, 2009 1:03 pm
I love it.
Comment by Throughwithlove14: Oct 28, 2009 8:59 am
Omg. I absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE it!!!
Comment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: Oct 28, 2009 11:04 am
I love it so much
Comment by thepenultimatum: Oct 28, 2009 11:09 am
Way to go!
Comment by sion: Oct 30, 2009 9:10 am
if I´d be a girl I´d write aaww BUT as a guy Sticking tongue out well done mate !
Comment by HeartbrokenEmo: Oct 30, 2009 11:00 pm
Nice!
Comment by mybeloved: Nov 2, 2009 4:21 pm
i absolutely love this poem to death haha verrrrrrrrrrrrrrry very good job. loveeeeee it<3
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