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Don't Leave Me

Candles flickered in the dark stone room, circling us.
Your cold body lay upon the floor.
Your hair splayed out, your eyes shut.
I tried to reach out to you.

They walked around us, dark robes swaying.
Their chants grew louder.
Your life was slipping away.
My love, my life, don’t leave me, I beg you.

I stumbled forth and fell upon my knees.
I grasped your hand and my tears fell upon your face.
For your life I prayed.
Beloved, do not leave me all alone.

by moonlightmage
posted on 03/02/2007

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Comment by tearsofrain: Mar 2, 2007 3:17 pm
whoa
Comment by tearsofrain: Mar 2, 2007 3:17 pm
this is amazing. but i have to confess. when i picture that, i laugh and laugh and laugh...
Comment by tearsofrain: Mar 2, 2007 3:35 pm
wow. im twisted.
Comment by moonlightmage: Mar 2, 2007 4:10 pm
lol yeah it was funny after i woke up
Comment by moonlightmage: Mar 2, 2007 7:38 pm
accually jessi it wasn't guys in robes in my dream.......it was Mrs. Dunn....but this made it more dramatic....lolz
Comment by chocolateshop: Mar 3, 2007 6:26 am
woooooooooow its hot
Comment by tearsofrain: Mar 3, 2007 9:32 am
lmao.
Comment by Sinnocence: Mar 4, 2007 7:19 am
wow i love it ..i always like sad n poems that dont end happy. leaves room 4 so much more.take ur time n polish ur next one
Comment by SisterofDarkness: Mar 14, 2007 9:28 am
POOKY I LOVE IT!!!
Comment by zentouro: Mar 15, 2007 12:49 pm
so dark, sad and hilarious all at once... kinda like people.

Congratulations, you have bottled up human nature.
Comment by moonlightmage: Mar 29, 2007 12:53 pm
ROFL!!! Accually, Ive found that its not particularly hard to figure out humans.
Comment by Darryn732: May 4, 2007 10:47 pm
wow spooky and cool all in one! i love it! take care
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