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Confusion

I look in a puddle I see a reflection,
I see a face full with affection,
The pressure making his heart bolt to the last beat,
Anxiety creates a bounce upon his feat,
His motivation giving him the will to death,
He won't give up until his last breath,
His heart shifted by this one person,
Reading his thoughts is like being dropped in the ocean,
You don't know how it will end up or turn out,
But there's one person he will adore without a doubt...

by MindTwister
posted on 06/20/2008

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Comment by MindTwister: Jun 30, 2008 1:37 pm
thanks
Comment by thestewardofgondor: Jul 1, 2008 2:28 pm
yeah this is awesome... Open smile
Comment by BrokenLove: Jun 20, 2008 9:50 pm
Cool.
Comment by MindTwister: Jun 20, 2008 2:43 pm
yeh abit lol its a mix between a struggle and love which is basicly the same thing lol
Comment by friendZdogZ: Jun 20, 2008 2:18 pm
aw I like this. it's about love right? or am I totally off? but it's a cool poem.
Comment by MindTwister: Jun 20, 2008 12:28 pm
please comment! thanks...
Comment by oceanreverie: Jun 26, 2008 8:46 pm
ooh i like this one. it really portrays love well, very true. great job!
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