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A Rose In My Pocket

Today I learned, I had a rose in my pocket
And you will forever be in my heart shaped locket

The beauty that illuminates the two is increasingly the same
My obsession that consumes me is anything but tame

Wanting to keep my rose safe, I ran to you
Knowing it was the rose and not I you would give much ado

You feel not the power you contain
Keeping my rose safe from all the potential pain

I want to stop on this silent night
And be reassured that it will be all right

Stroking back my hair and looking me in the eye
I realize I will never have to say goodbye

by FaithfulFriend
posted on 11/03/2009

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Comment by blackfallenrose07: Nov 4, 2009 12:05 am
has lots of meanings to it. great job =)
Comment by xDestructive: Nov 4, 2009 8:14 am
beautiful poem, gives off quite a tranquil feeling to me.. i think when people rhyme, kinda makes it an employable read.. ;.. I really like these lines..

"I want to stop on this silent night
And be reassured that it will be all right"

that's all I need too, to be reassured everything will be all right... Smiley beautiful poem.
Comment by darksideofme: Nov 4, 2009 5:25 am
I thought some of the rhymes seemed forced and sortta corny.

Beautifully worded though.
Comment by rpurcell: Nov 3, 2009 8:00 am
i like it!
Comment by fruitloop199: Nov 3, 2009 9:12 am
Breathtaking...
Comment by mybeloved: Nov 3, 2009 12:00 pm
i really love this.
Comment by Luv4shelly: Nov 3, 2009 3:42 pm
this is beautiful. great work
Comment by gene: Nov 3, 2009 4:47 pm
true
Comment by jenneeexx: Nov 3, 2009 5:20 pm
so awesome.
Comment by surreal: Nov 3, 2009 7:57 pm
Beautiful words
Comment by DaniDarlz: Nov 4, 2009 5:59 pm
aaw this is so sweet! that special person should feel special lol!
Comment by KillerBlueEyes: Nov 4, 2009 7:08 pm
its short and sweet but yet as so much meaning. great poem
Comment by hutwohl58: Nov 7, 2009 2:00 pm
keeping safe, the rose from potential pain. might flow better. I like your opening two lines very much. It grabbed me. Made me stop and read it again before going on.
Comment by alias123: Nov 7, 2009 10:16 pm
I like this!
Comment by Fangbanger: Nov 11, 2009 4:52 am
Its so romantic!! Good job.
Comment by Darkdaydreamer: Nov 11, 2009 7:24 pm
love it!
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