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"I Do"

Taking your hand in mine your warmth so sweet
Walking together through fields of wheat
Loving just being with you
Every day brings me something new

Pick you up in my arms to hold you close
The skies in my heart you make brighter then most
Laugh at the feel of your lips on mine
As long as I have you I am better then fine

As my love grows realization hits home
A wonderful future before me looms
I have a plan brewing all about you
I won’t be satisfied until you say “I do”


(I love you Cristy)

by Acheron
posted on 10/27/2009

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Comment by lexxie2323: Nov 9, 2009 7:59 pm
wow sean u out did urself here god love stinks glad its workin 4 u tho
Comment by LunaGetsuna: Oct 28, 2009 5:24 am
I really hope this comes true, Sean; good for you for following your heart.
Comment by KrazieKenzie: Oct 28, 2009 9:07 am
oh my gosh
i'm in class right now, and this poem made me freakin cry.
my mascara is all over my face. thanks a bunch.

you remind me so much of my love. if he could find the words, i'm sure this is exactly what he'd say.

did you show your girl this?
because you should.

idk, to me, it brings back the meaning of "i love you"
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Oct 28, 2009 9:47 am
gah *tear*
whew...this is just too much...

It's breathtaking sean!
I am SO happy for the both of you--

you deserve eachother!
This is absolutely beautiful Smiley
Comment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: Oct 28, 2009 10:57 am
I love this poem
Comment by Hiddenot: Oct 28, 2009 12:59 pm
yep..... love sucks..
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Oct 28, 2009 1:31 pm
It only sucks if it's not meant to work out, Hiddenot...

But when it is...
*smiles* you'll think differently Smiley
Comment by Throughwithlove14: Oct 28, 2009 2:14 pm
Omg I SOOOO friggin love it. SOOO Romantic. I agree with KrazieKenzie!!!
Comment by Rachel: Oct 28, 2009 3:48 pm
I have to say, it's very refreshing to read a romantic poem after indulging in bleak poetry for a couple of hours. It's a very sweet poem.
One little tiny minute detail though. I think the "you" in the first line of the first paragraph is supposed to be "your". Other than that diminutive mistake, good job.
Comment by nothingisimpossible: Oct 29, 2009 12:52 pm
Wooooow!!!
Woooow!!!
Very moving and very toching piece...It is true because I know how your love is pure...I am so happy that you find the right girl who deserves your love...All the best for you my friend...Good Luck...Smiley Smiley
Comment by Fathom: Oct 29, 2009 3:51 pm
I wish to find someone who would write me his poems. *sigh
Comment by LostInDarkness: Oct 30, 2009 3:08 pm
AWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment by rosesANDletters: Nov 1, 2009 4:05 pm
how i feel about my love. he is everything i could hope and ask for. and i want to marry him and have a family with him
Comment by mybeloved: Nov 9, 2009 8:02 pm
awww!!! oh meh gosh!! i love this poem. *votes up 10 times*
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