I Will Dance

Title : I'll dance, good poem just a thought (second line) Your heart sings. is what i think you meant. other then that great poem

this is a good poem, it reminds me of a lot of things...

great poem

yeah this is a good one too i think i liked the last one better in the sense it had an emotional connection... odd that nobody else had commented... but yeah this one's good. personally i'd get rid of all of the "always" in because always _______ parts because it'd sounds better in my head but then again that's just me and we read things differnetly hexa good bro