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war

guns fire
shrapnal blows
im sick of the war
i wish it would go
it takes are men
it kills our dreams
jest for ones evle sceam
no good can come
jest hurt and dispare
i cry at night
in the worm air
but do they care
could the care
no
in humen swines fill are world with pain and dispare
show me why the world must live
in pain and strife
fuck there jest kids
no older then me
holding a gun
stop the war
god its not fun

by cunnmatt249
posted on 03/26/2007

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Comment by alone: Mar 26, 2007 2:58 pm
That is so true!! I feel the exact same way about the war....and it is a great poem. Nice work.
Comment by MsKeys1707: Mar 27, 2007 4:24 am
wow this is soo true
i feel the same way too
i think it has gone too far i mean how many innocent young people will have to die before they feel satisfied
GREAT POEM!!
Comment by iloveanimation: Mar 30, 2007 6:40 pm
thats awesome i feel the same way just make peace and save the families
Comment by KillerBlueEyes: Apr 1, 2007 5:29 pm
i totally agree and fel the same way, great poem
Comment by aCrazyApe: Apr 23, 2007 12:38 pm
Good poem. A few spelling errors. Great message.
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