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Unknown and I

I . a r i s e

My senses take flight,
twirling on beams of moonlight.
f l o a t i n g . a w a y

Bare feet tread a fragrant path,
Shrouded in a cloth of blossoms.
A breeze toys with locks of gold.
f u r t h e r . I . d r i f t

Form drawn by a lunar siren,
Silhouetted in shimmering silver.
Peace comes dripping slowly here.
I . w a n d e r

Are these footsteps mine?
I . w o n d e r

This shadow is incomplete,
Without answers to all the questions
I . s e e k

Missing pieces lie in wait
Strewn on the path ahead
Time will yield its bounty
I . a w a i t

I've seen flashes of other journeys
There will be more….
Of this I am sure

I breathe in timeless moonlight,
Relishing the gifts bestowed,
I behold the beauty of now,
Unknown and I are at peace

I . a m

by footprints
posted on 01/08/2008

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Comment by Darryn732: Jan 8, 2008 11:08 pm
Great Job I Love It Smiley
Comment by kayla: Jan 9, 2008 2:14 am
Wonderful writingSmiley
Voting it up!
I . am
Comment by missingmom: Jan 9, 2008 7:09 am
Beautiful! Smiley
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Jan 9, 2008 11:40 am
nice
Comment by Tequilla: Jan 9, 2008 11:58 am
Good poem I like it...nice!
Comment by tearsofrain: Jan 11, 2008 5:42 pm
your poetry is so exquisite...
it just makes me sigh a its beauty. i'm not sure how you manange it =) but i like the mystery
favorite stanza:
"Form drawn by a lunar siren,
Silhouetted in shimmering silver.
Peace comes dripping slowly here.
I . w a n d e r"
I love how you've taken creative liberties on this poem, as well. It's there, so why not use it ?
Comment by GiveMeU: Jan 12, 2008 9:19 am
WONDERFUL POEM! I like it alot..Open smile
Comment by VaeVictus: Jan 12, 2008 8:29 pm
very good
Comment by floating: Jan 13, 2008 2:50 pm
In a dream...
Comment by oldman: Jan 16, 2008 7:06 pm
Nice! Smiley

Great form too.
Comment by 10000nails: Jan 19, 2008 7:15 am
Hmm...it's introspective. It's meandering around in a wasteland few dare visit. It's about finding tranquility in the on-going NOW.

Fascinating.

Up up and away.
Comment by swanprincess: Jan 20, 2008 11:57 pm
wow... greatest poem a read in days... voting up
Comment by meltedsnowman: Jan 31, 2008 10:49 am
yu are DEEP
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