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To Become A Man

Speak the truth
and men will hear
Respect only follows
a heart sincere
All who know you
will gladly follow
If in gloom
and self pity
you never wallow
Stand erect,
sure and strong
Admit your failings,
when you are wrong
Never boast about yourself
nor matters of love
or your wealth
Place yourself
above no others
But consider all
to be your brothers
Through your life,
in confidence go
Then your strength
shall surely show
And if from troubles
you never ran
Then, all shall say
You've become a man

by grunty
posted on 09/26/2009

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Comment by beautifuldisaster: Sep 28, 2009 2:04 pm
I like it... reminds me of Rudyard Kipling's poem "If"

Thumbs up Smiley
Comment by deathsmessanger: Sep 28, 2009 11:13 am
Its good...but yeah i agree with alot of them does sound like somthing the poppins lady would say.
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Sep 27, 2009 5:49 am
It's the attempt that counts. None of us can stand alone, but trying makes you a man.

Oh yeah, and not crying like a girl...that helps too.
Comment by TomorrowsCure: Sep 26, 2009 7:21 am
This seems honorable enough
very dedicated!
I like it! :]
Comment by Tinkerbellpixie: Sep 26, 2009 7:34 am
Only a real man could admit all of these things. I love your rhyming that keeps the poem flowing, but is not forced.
Really great job grunty!
Comment by FairDarkness: Sep 26, 2009 8:53 am
very awesome..... Smiley
Comment by NiceGuysLoveBetter: Sep 26, 2009 10:07 am
Great poem Grunty. I want to see your response to my poem. "Fear Death"
Comment by savannah12: Sep 26, 2009 7:01 am
nice...Smiley
Comment by true: Sep 26, 2009 6:37 pm
grunty grunty grunty! what grunty! i read it as i have never read great poems.. like it's the greatest... maybe!! it's too much grunty.. really giant piece,, that what i believe in... a wise man.. saying it truly.. poetry should stand to clap for your creative mind... thanks for sharing such valuable pieces..
Comment by scarredemotions17: Sep 27, 2009 12:42 pm
that sounds wonderful wow and the perspective of it is excellent
Comment by true: Sep 27, 2009 12:45 pm
hey monkey man, crying like a girl helps men to stay healthy... try it and you will see but not in front of the others. be careful. lol.
Comment by BlackbookPast: Sep 27, 2009 3:55 pm
this is really inspiring
Comment by PrettyOdd: Sep 27, 2009 5:20 pm
I'm pretty sure the world would be a much better place if we all thought more like this.
Comment by Telemachus: Sep 28, 2009 1:53 am
True that - most def'.

..and to add to Monkey's frivolous list - at some stage in your life you must stare meaningfully into the distance instead of just answering the fkn question.
Comment by darksideofme: Sep 28, 2009 7:19 am
It sounds like something out of Merry Poppins or something....

A lot of things make a man.
Not just be honorable
Wash your hands before dinner
and say yes and thank you

*Gags*
Comment by grunty: Sep 28, 2009 7:27 am
Merry Poppins?
Gags?

Oh, did I forget to mention, taking back a cheating girlfriend?

"Me thinks thou doth protest too much."

Not to worry young man...someday you may find your way.
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