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Amazing poetry written in pain,
Hauntingly beautiful and some so plain,
Nothing to lose and nothing to gain.

Just words on paper that we all feel,
Love and hate that we all possess,
Our lives on paper that we reveal.

I come and read about the pain,
The lost loves that so many feel,
Lives tortured and its all so real.

I come to learn of your mistakes,
How you’ve lived through the worst of times,
In such pain and deep heartache.

They are filled with laughter, fears and hope,
Tears and dreams and how we all cope,
We share our lives with our different rhymes.

Shattered lives and butterfly kisses,
Broken promises and tears that bleed,
Souls that ache and simple human needs.

Some who cut to heal their pain,
Those who cry a million tears,
Other’s offer their profane prayers.

I read words that make me laugh,
Mischievous and mystery, verbs and nouns,
Other’s make me think and frown.

The dark words that make me shiver in delight,
Speaking of things that go bump in the night.

Out there in the twilight zone,
Your feelings & emotions get to me,
Even though you’re all unknown.

So write until your hearts are vent,
Pen all your pain and dark torment,
I’ll keep reading into the night,
Your words of poetry my guiding light.

by prettyspl
posted on 08/25/2009

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Comment by scorpi: Sep 1, 2009 7:00 am
gr8 1 Smiley
Comment by prettyspl: Aug 30, 2009 12:10 am
Wow..thank you all very much for your wonderful comments. I really appreciate each and every one of them. : )
Comment by Alexanne: Sep 2, 2009 2:01 am
wow. amazing!
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Aug 25, 2009 3:30 pm
This is AMAZING!!! And I agree-I read for these same reasons...people have so much to say in the most brilliant ways! This is really good! *votes up* and yeah, Very Inspirational too! I want to thank you for the poems you have read of mine too. Much appreciated, my friend ;]
Comment by nazereth357: Aug 25, 2009 3:33 pm
oh oh oh! I like! Open smile the stanza that ends in "empty souls and human needs" kinda stuck out from the rest.. that's probably just me though.
Comment by TearsFall: Aug 28, 2009 9:41 am
WOW! This is amazing.. I love it soo much
Comment by Selene: Aug 28, 2009 12:37 pm
so much truth in your words, great poem x
Comment by NiceGuysLoveBetter: Aug 29, 2009 4:37 am
This is absolutely wonderful. So much better than half of the poetry written on here.
Comment by nothingisimpossible: Aug 30, 2009 1:59 am
WOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!......I am speechless.......brilliant.... brilliant.......brilliantSmiley
Comment by supbuttercup: Sep 3, 2009 11:03 am
very beautiful
Comment by Poetryinmotion: Sep 9, 2009 4:54 pm
I love it!! OMG
Comment by Atavist: Jan 1, 2010 4:13 pm
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Brava Miss pretty. I think that there is more to gain than lose from understanding anothers pain and realisation of the fact that in a world of 6 billion you are not alone in those feelings. And this? This is why I read YOUR poems!
Comment by rsurfn2: Jan 1, 2010 4:53 pm

I found another great poem!
I am so happy I have you on my radar. I guess I should read all
there are just so many from everyone....
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