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Screw the Repetition

At times I stop to look into the sky
For every look there is a different view

There is always something new
Yes of course the sun does rise and set

That cycle happens every day
But it never happens the same way

There are sometimes clouds
And never in the same place

There may just be a clear blue sky
With or without wind

Though every day it seems the same
There is always something different

Every day of my life seems the same
But if I really look there is always something different.

by Iamapencil
posted on 03/17/2009

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Comment by mysterygrl: Mar 17, 2009 11:28 am
WOW...I love this poem. Its really good and yea very good theme!!!
Comment by CallumNorman: Mar 17, 2009 11:15 am
great theme!! i really liked that ..
Comment by beezle: Mar 17, 2009 10:40 pm
i really like what you've said here...great write.
Comment by toxicchubakka: Mar 17, 2009 9:18 pm
i like this too very simple
Comment by MrDeliver: Mar 18, 2009 8:53 am
Really like the poem
Comment by wordfreak: Mar 18, 2009 12:41 pm
nice,
simple but effective
Comment by darksideofme: Mar 18, 2009 1:05 pm
I think that at some point in the billion years the earth has been around.... the clouds eventually do hit the same spot.... especially on those days where there is nothing but clouds......
Hahahaha
but I get what you mean.
Comment by Iamapencil: Mar 19, 2009 11:23 am
Well BUBBLE! if you look there are always different shades in different spots and the same cloud is never in the same spot so HA! xP
Comment by someone: Mar 19, 2009 5:03 pm
Believe or not but in some countries they only have 2 hours of night sky leaving the rest of the 22 with light from the sun.. I guess it's called nature but hey... great poem! *votes up Smiley
Comment by someone: Mar 19, 2009 5:15 pm
a new day breathes new life.. day to day.. week to week and most importantly... month to month... look up to the sky and the stars.. look into the moon and the seas... question your true meaning to be.. Smiley
Comment by someone: Mar 21, 2009 12:06 pm
speachless for a change.. very very good poetry.. KEEP WRITEING! Smiley *votes up*
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