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One last try

I tried to do it
i really did
but then again
i cant take this shit
more and more people
giving me crap
i dont know what to do
except for hide
lonely and sad
waiting for a light
in a cave
but then i see something
and they start to come in
so they say
try, try, try again
so i do and i win
its not that hard but
i cant give in
because life is hard
don't let it shut
that stupid door
to where its dark
let some light in ppl
its how you win

by gaara
posted on 02/20/2008

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Comment by hiddeninblood: Feb 21, 2008 10:58 am
i like this poem keep up the writing oh yea thx 4 the comment
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Feb 22, 2008 7:59 am
good poem
Comment by livelife: Feb 22, 2008 11:48 am
real good
Comment by Tequilla: Feb 29, 2008 12:09 pm
really good.
Comment by tobeloved: Mar 3, 2008 4:47 pm
really good poem.
Comment by meltedsnowman: Mar 5, 2008 9:51 am
omg!! really good i like this one
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