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Liquid Sunshine

I hear a rumble,
feel a shake.
My heart speeds up,
I smile.

To my feet I stumble,
out the door quick.
I throw my hands up,
My mind wanders for a while.

Liquid sunshine consumes me,
It drips down my clothes and hair.
I am addicted you see,
and i'll let you know that without a care.

From morning untill night,
You can find me their.
Some people say it is not right,
others point and stare.

The light flashing past me,
reminds me i'm alive.
It takes me back to the age of three,
into the puddles i want to dive.

Liquid sunshine all around,
catch it before it soaks into the ground.
Liquid sunshine my excape,
This is a feeling you cannot fake.


Niki Lu Voie

by NikisNightmare
posted on 06/01/2009

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Comment by Kiam: Jun 1, 2009 9:47 am
well written xoxox
Comment by messengerbird: Jun 1, 2009 11:21 am
i like the rhyme scheme you got going on here. this is a very nice poem. a few spelling errors, but the structure and topic are wonderful. good job!
Comment by messengerbird: Jun 1, 2009 11:21 am
i like the rhyme scheme you got going on here. this is a very nice poem. a few spelling errors, but the structure and topic are wonderful. good job!
Comment by SilentWords: Jun 1, 2009 4:25 pm
great poem. The title really stood out to me, it sounds so lovely...yet deadly. anywho, great job!
Comment by Treblunka: Jun 2, 2009 2:30 pm
baby, I love ya.
Comment by wounderfulmotherandwife: Jul 22, 2009 10:32 am
Wonderful poem
Comment by cuttingboard: Oct 8, 2009 11:54 am
good rhyme scheme. i love the symbolism
Comment by iSacrificeWar: Oct 14, 2009 4:33 pm
what a great poem.
keep writing!
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