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Life.."Gods garden"
Life is like a garden
And people are like tiny seeds
Nutured by love and friendship and caring.
And if enough time ,hope and patience are spent in our
everyday living
We bloom into gorgeous flowers!
Sometimes even an old neglected plant left in a yard gone...
Its seed will unexpectedly blossom
Mark people!
Mark!
For these are the most cherished blossom of all!!!
by Novembre
posted on 07/20/2007
And people are like tiny seeds
Nutured by love and friendship and caring.
And if enough time ,hope and patience are spent in our
everyday living
We bloom into gorgeous flowers!
Sometimes even an old neglected plant left in a yard gone...
Its seed will unexpectedly blossom
Mark people!
Mark!
For these are the most cherished blossom of all!!!
by Novembre
posted on 07/20/2007
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Comment by Bourne: Jul 20, 2007 6:19 am
very beautiful wordsComment by PoemWritingGuy: Jul 20, 2007 6:45 am
Beautiful poem.Comment by MsKeys1707: Jul 20, 2007 7:15 am
bveautifully written
I love it!
Comment by TheEmoFreak: Jul 20, 2007 2:06 pm
wow great poem. sounds like a parable i just read for my really gay religious education thngyComment by pmaravelias: Jul 20, 2007 7:24 pm
Nice job, but I wish there weren't as many weeds in God's garden.Comment by quies: Jul 20, 2007 7:28 pm
Well-written, I like how you've strengthened the poem's message in the last 3 lines.Comment by TifneyS67: Jul 20, 2007 8:00 pm
Ah yes, I took your advice and read your poems...you do "feel me"!!!! I really loved this. I'm the old, neglected plant...but trying to change that.
Thanks!
Comment by friendZdogZ: Jul 20, 2007 9:21 pm
ya i'm like tifney, i totally get this poemComment by Findingyou: Jul 23, 2007 6:08 am
aweosme poem..very good.enjoyed it totallyComment by KCFangel: Jul 23, 2007 10:35 am
very different, yet very good, and very lovely! good job keep it up!! ......</3 angelComment by Veninedge: Jul 23, 2007 11:10 am
Life is like a garden... dig it.
that came to mind when I read it ^_^
but very good all the same.
the idea is great.
and the writing is pretty good.
the only thing wrong is the spelling of "nurture"'but still a great poem!
Comment by MechanicalAnimal: Jul 23, 2007 3:23 pm
Good concept!Comment by xoxlostlovexox: Jul 23, 2007 10:25 pm
cute....i like it...it reminds me of my acting class....the stuff he made us recite...good job!!!!!!!