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Laughing yet Crying

Everyone laughes and everyone cries,
the soul would be twisted if emotions die.

I met this beautiful girl that cryed,
She felt so lonely deep inside.

Her soul was like an empty vase,
Her spirit shattered all over the place.

I gave her bread with a Holy taste,
But then she sprayed me with peppered mase.

tumbling and stumbling the girl begins to smile,
I laughed uncannily and stared at her a while.

I asked why she was crying and she just laughed at me,
I'm no fool, she was hurt and it was plain to see.

Showing her my poetry filled her soul with joy,
She was now so happy all because of moy.

Her happiness brought tears to my eyes that I could not contain,
She look at me then suddenly it began to rain.

She asked why I was crying with such beauty&grace,
My reply was "I'm not crying I'm just laughing on the wrong side of my face.

She held me in her arms then whispered 'Indemnifying'
Now I know how it feels when your Laughing yet Crying.

by Holychild
posted on 03/29/2009

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Comments: 19
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Comment by HappyGoLucky: Mar 30, 2009 8:42 am
Wow, that brings a whole new perspective to the phrase, i like it!
Comment by loveseekerhatefinder: Apr 13, 2009 9:47 pm
wow, i really like this one..ditto from Acheron,lol..love it though!
Comment by pal605427: Aug 7, 2009 12:49 pm
Wow that is a good poem like a short story wit a funny mddle and a happy ending Nice
Comment by monstar: Mar 31, 2009 12:05 am
great poem
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Mar 31, 2009 7:31 am
What a beautiful poem.
Simply stunning. I enjoyed every word of it.
Comment by bubbles13: Mar 31, 2009 6:25 am
really great poem!!
Comment by lionxxlamb: Mar 31, 2009 5:45 pm
Very amazing. =]
My favorite lines were,

"Her soul was like an empty vase, Her spirit shattered all over the place."

I love all of your poems.
Keep writing, darling. =]
Comment by Holychild: Mar 30, 2009 11:03 pm
wait until u see my next one on the 9th.. its going to be the reason why my book.. well just wait for itSmiley

God bless everyone with
Love&PeaceSmiley
Comment by darksideofme: Mar 31, 2009 5:08 am
Very nice..... The imagery was beautiful.
Comment by SilentWords: Mar 31, 2009 8:45 am
I'm not crying I'm just laughing on the wrong side of my face.

Very Beauitful! It made me smile! Great Poem!!
Comment by FaithfulFriend: Mar 30, 2009 2:10 pm
I love this! It has an awesome message.
Comment by jordan24: Mar 30, 2009 5:00 pm
wow, I agree FaithfulFriend.
And it's beautiful how you wrote this, the story and all, I love it.
I especially love the first 2 lines.
Smiley I vote up Smiley
Comment by Tinkerbellpixie: Mar 31, 2009 1:54 pm
I'm not crying I'm just laughing on the wrong side of my face.

Amazing! This was really lovely and it made me smile.
Really great write!
Comment by Freewriter91: Mar 31, 2009 5:26 pm
Stunning Poem.. better then anything i have ever written wow
Comment by yukina: Mar 31, 2009 9:33 pm
ITS SO AMAZING! I going to buy your book when it comes out sweetie!
xoxoxoxoxo
Comment by monstar: Mar 31, 2009 9:51 pm
I envy you because all your poetry rhymes! I havent posted a poem yet because I want to beat you Marco.
so much power and you wont use it. why is that? why do you hide behind your poetry?

oh its a great poem by the way. -spkg-
Comment by FoolishDestruction: Apr 1, 2009 12:00 pm
nice
Comment by Acheron: Apr 10, 2009 11:27 pm
I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE.
Comment by zoe: Jul 20, 2009 8:25 am
i so agree w monstar..... but ui dont think u hide i just think its youre way of saying how u think an feel an to u its also the best way to get threw to ppl it worked for me but tell me if im rong...u do like to make ppl guess an think an u find it interesting so see wat there reactions areSmileySmiley
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