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Its still there

I'm sick of everyone thinking the world has gone to shit,
I mean it has, but not entirely

There is so many good places to be like the ocean,
Up the creek, out in the bush

People have just gotta learn to live a little,
Grab a few mates go on a trip.
The peace and tranquilty is still there
You're just not tryin hard enough to find it.

by Jeffers
posted on 09/09/2009

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Comment by JamesR: Sep 9, 2009 5:20 am
Good work, I like how you made it nice and bluntly, made it straight forward to people; tell them how obvious it is that the good stuff is still there.
Comment by grunty: Sep 9, 2009 5:37 am
You have a good point mate. I just moved my family to the mountains of North Georgia and I have to say, all is peaceful here. But every day I have to travel back to the human jungle to work. But it makes coming home that much better. I can see my mountain for twenty miles before I get there. What a feeling!
Comment by SilentWords: Sep 9, 2009 11:05 am
See this is a great idea for a poem, uplifting and honest. It just needs to be in a more poetic form, it just sounds like you are talking to someone sitting next to you on the bus. Put some color in it, Im sure you can do it! Keep writing.
Comment by Iamapencil: Sep 10, 2009 11:44 pm
(at least until man polutes the creek, cuts up the bush for something to burn, and the ocean starts flooding over from the melting ice burgs)
Comment by Iamapencil: Sep 10, 2009 11:45 pm
sorry... oh gosh... I just realised what a terrible comment that was, I'm sorry...
Comment by Perpetual: Sep 12, 2009 2:24 pm
i agree with you. =] nice poem
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