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I Judge You Unfit to Judge.

Your mechanical lies,
tell yourself why,
I deserve your evil eye,
am I not good enough?
Would it be better if I fucking died?

Lets not sugar coat this,
I'm not that sweet,
does that give you the right to,
keep judging me?

Does it even matter that,
I've lived a good life?
Mixed with sin,
uncorrupted mind.

Did you just fall short of,
typecasting me?
Didn't quite fit in your circle,
so I'm judged unfit to be?

Steal from me everyone I care about,
don't you see?
You've driven me away,
it's you corrupting me.

I judge you unfit to judge, god,
and I hope you'll ask me why,
hiding behind scriptures and songs, god,
followed by those that buy your lies,
if you're omnipresent then you can see,
all of the hurt you've brought to "your" beings,
and you don't care,
so why should I!?

No belief,
so brand me,
the visible heritic,
but what have you given back?
Prayed so often on bleeding knees,
never an answer, I can almost hear you laugh.

So stop acting like a hero,
scriptures saying that you care,
when the millions that you say you love,
have never had you there.
I judge you unfit to judge,
no longer your burdens do I bear,
I'll help souls where you have failed,
we'll see how much better I do fare.

by SinnerIndeed
posted on 05/07/2008

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Comment by Breathexxforxxme: Jun 19, 2008 8:13 am
Wow!! this was amazing and i agree i am no believer either
i truly and nhonestly hate the false god that so many so called believers believe in it it is so not kool anyways very good poem it was amazing and if i were or do write a poem like this it would not be anwhere close to this it basically describes so much more truth than what i could do for one that i may possibly just write in the future... very good
Comment by bloodyrose: May 7, 2008 10:57 am
YES!!YES!! totally fricken agree....i am no believer of him...he laughs i know i feel it....way too good...
Comment by Darryn732: May 7, 2008 11:24 am
Interesting poem Smiley I like it (so much anger) Take care
Comment by AngelIndeed: May 7, 2008 2:41 pm
you know my opion you know my view but this one brought back a certain that i have been to let go of but i know its always gonna be there
Comment by paulina13: May 7, 2008 5:06 pm
nice, well written
Comment by loveforeverlivelonger: May 8, 2008 5:58 pm
good poem i like it. wow this is really good
Comment by oceanreverie: May 15, 2008 9:05 am
wow this is a really strong and powerful poem. i absolutely love the last two stanzas, they are really haunting.
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: May 25, 2008 2:49 am
hmmm i like it is really well written but your veiws are er..hard to explain
Comment by Freewriter91: Jul 21, 2008 1:21 pm
Powerful thats all i have to say
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