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Her Strength
Her Strength
Strength, you showed meaning of the word.
How to smile and hide the pain.
Even though you feel just the same.
Hugging and loving them all,
So close the edge of pain, but not daring to fall.
Because you know the fall brings tears they cant see,
So you show us all how loving and strong you can be.
Even though he was your brother and friend,
You pick us all up and carry us through this hurt.
But I saw you, how you buried your pain in the dirt.
So I wanted you to know that I love you more than you know,
And now its your turn. Your turn to let the pain show.
(thank you my dearest aunt)
by PureWhiteStain
posted on 11/12/2009
Strength, you showed meaning of the word.
How to smile and hide the pain.
Even though you feel just the same.
Hugging and loving them all,
So close the edge of pain, but not daring to fall.
Because you know the fall brings tears they cant see,
So you show us all how loving and strong you can be.
Even though he was your brother and friend,
You pick us all up and carry us through this hurt.
But I saw you, how you buried your pain in the dirt.
So I wanted you to know that I love you more than you know,
And now its your turn. Your turn to let the pain show.
(thank you my dearest aunt)
by PureWhiteStain
posted on 11/12/2009
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Comment by PureWhiteStain: Dec 19, 2009 11:27 pm
Thanks. Still haven't gotten the chance yet, but ASPComment by SweetTea: Nov 12, 2009 9:06 pm
Aw this is so sweet. I am very sorry for your loss.Comment by PureWhiteStain: Nov 12, 2009 9:24 pm
Thank you. I was so amazed by her, had to write thisComment by BlackenedInnocene: Nov 12, 2009 9:48 pm
Hola. Supposed to comment to get points I think. Was going to ask if you wanted some constructive criticism. Lol. Let me know. Love.
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Comment by BlackenedInnocene: Nov 28, 2009 5:46 pm
When are you going to present this? I think you should. Think it would prove beneficial. 
PComment by BlackenedInnocene: Nov 28, 2009 5:49 pm
By the way, I LOVE these 2 lines: ''So close to the edge of pain, but not daring to fall.'', and ''But I saw you, how you buried your pain in the dirt.'' Those lines kill me every time. Such and awesome job. Love. P