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Come Dance

Come and walk with me,
Take my hand and we'll trip through fields,
Of golden waist high stalks of barley,
Clouds like puffs of cotton candy,
Stretched across the sky, that vast blue sheet.

Come and walk with me,
We'll tiptoe along the beach,
Squish the sand between our toes,
As the seabreeze softly blows,
Is this not such a delightful place to meet?

Come and dance with me,
As the sun slowly sets,
As the night arrives,
And everyone forgets.

Come dance with me,
In the warm summer air,
With your hand in mine,
And without a care.

Come and forget everything,
Come dance.

by beautifuldisaster
posted on 05/13/2009

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Comments: 42
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Comment by Rehydrate: Jul 10, 2009 12:18 am
Invokes a really nice emotion Open smile
Comment by xenki: Jun 28, 2009 7:45 pm
reminds me of someone. .

Smiley
Comment by crumbsonthetable: Jun 26, 2009 12:31 pm
Reminds me of Lord Of The Rings.
Comment by alostsoul: May 13, 2009 7:32 pm
pretty!
Comment by FallenAngel666: May 13, 2009 11:11 am
this poem is sooo good. i got goospumps up my arms. great work.
Comment by kingOVDAwest: May 13, 2009 11:12 am
beautiful poem
Comment by krzykool: May 13, 2009 11:19 am
this is a wonderful poem. I dig this a lot.
Comment by darknessofcrows: May 13, 2009 1:21 pm
This is wonderful! Happy, happy, happy! Hmmmn, movement, alliteration, imagery, rhythm and loose rhyme scheme...Great!
Its just nice to read something that's well written and not depressing, you know?
Grilliant!
Comment by DemonicAngel: May 13, 2009 1:45 pm
great poem, loved it!
Comment by jamieduck: May 13, 2009 6:07 pm
Peaceful and happy! i like it
Comment by Shortie14: May 13, 2009 4:25 pm
That is beautiful.
I love it!

(LittleDareDevil)
Comment by darknessofcrows: May 13, 2009 9:31 pm
I found out what vote means...
Don't know why I didn't figure it out sooner...
Anyway,
Vote up!
Comment by ilusmxo: May 14, 2009 5:16 pm
Awh this is cute, and imaginative Smiley
Comment by Nick1959: May 15, 2009 8:58 am
Great Poem, wonderful theme I would say it say it could be inspirational or love Idk about friendship I feel it goes beyond friendship. I agree vote up.
Great Job and wonderfully put togeather.
Comment by Luv4shelly: May 15, 2009 11:53 am
this has a very happy vibe, I like it. it seems more than just friends though as Nick said. it seems like a love poem.
Comment by sroby2005: May 15, 2009 3:24 pm
Verry nice, lots of emotion Smiley
Comment by decode: May 16, 2009 12:27 am
this is beautiful
Comment by someone: May 16, 2009 1:44 pm
Simply Beautifull Smiley
Comment by irckdud: May 17, 2009 2:24 pm
aww wonderful =]
Comment by oceanreverie: May 17, 2009 6:33 pm
wow this is just beautiful, very inspirational and thought provoking. wonderful work!
Comment by BrandyReckaway: May 19, 2009 8:15 am
Great Immagery. It made me feel like I was there doing those things. Wicked job. Keep writing.

Vote UP
Comment by THEprincess: May 19, 2009 11:29 am
AMAZING its very beautiful its wow keep writing
Comment by FaithfulFriend: May 20, 2009 2:51 pm
truly beautiful and put together perfectly!
Comment by mightymouse: May 20, 2009 3:26 pm
nice poem.
Comment by LunaGetsuna: May 20, 2009 9:07 pm
Beautiful i love it
Comment by birdsofthenight: May 22, 2009 3:16 pm
love the imagery =)
Comment by savannah12: May 22, 2009 5:29 pm
i luv it. it lets the reader see what you are talking about, very discriptive
Comment by waterwitch: May 29, 2009 6:04 pm
i love it. it shows how much dancing can really be either than just a sport..the passion you have in here is so awesome. was it your life or a friend's? i am just curious?
Comment by NikisNightmare: Jun 1, 2009 9:25 am
when i read this poem i really could picture what you were saying. I love your description. WELL DONE! Write on!
Comment by rubyhendry: Jun 1, 2009 6:32 pm
great poem. it paints a great picture in my mind.
Comment by BitterSweet: Jun 1, 2009 9:18 pm
Such a bright, jocund poem!
Comment by kaliiii4: Jun 2, 2009 12:58 pm
beautiful
amazing
Comment by Duckie: Jun 2, 2009 5:12 pm
that's a good poem! and idk if it should be in friendship poems or not.
Comment by alostsoul: Jun 3, 2009 8:18 pm
Love it !
Comment by ghostgirl: Jun 4, 2009 3:11 am
wow u rock
Comment by NoFlogging: Jul 2, 2009 6:22 pm
Inspirational indeed
Comment by jamieduck: Jul 4, 2009 10:06 pm
Beautiful
Comment by exstasy: Jul 21, 2009 5:05 pm
Very Pretty
Comment by Mcmhairix: Aug 12, 2009 3:40 am
great poem
Comment by beautifuldisaster: Sep 23, 2009 10:44 am
I read this again and I begin to think it's lacking.... but the question is what??
Comment by grunty: Sep 23, 2009 11:26 am
Maybe all it is lacking is a comment from me...

Beautiful!
Comment by beautifuldisaster: Sep 23, 2009 11:31 am
Haha thanks Grunty... You saved it from the finger of doom... for now! :L
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