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All The Things


All of the things that I had done for you
All of this time I spent on somebody so untrue
All of this time I guess I never knew
I had fallen, or so I thought it was true

All of the time that I have put to waste
All of the tears that I had to taste
All of the battles I had to face
All the memories caught in blaze

All of the words I had used
All my time you had to abuse
And this love I thought was true
Crashing down as the pain grew
All the time I believed in you

You made my heart believe your lies
You made my heart fall for your disguise
Sinking to the ground and suffering in your demise
Taking effect as the tears start falling from my eyes
But in time my heart will mend and understand it's whys








Dec 3rd, of 2008
Finished 0ct. 10th, 2009
By Cody Potter

by Loveformusicandpoetry1790
posted on 10/10/2009

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Comments: 11
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Comment by darknessofcrows: Oct 10, 2009 1:02 am
Very well, mon ami. Very sad. Very beautiful. (nod)... then I shall vote up...
Comment by childOFtheNIGHT: Oct 10, 2009 2:38 am
really good =)
Comment by deep: Oct 10, 2009 7:21 am
really good one ...........
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Oct 10, 2009 8:48 am
Jeez...This is really Good, hun, but very sad. I'm really sorry for this Sad face
Comment by crannjoankeel: Oct 11, 2009 9:55 pm
perfect structure
Comment by LavenderLakes: Oct 12, 2009 12:17 pm
excellent.
Comment by Freewriter91: Oct 13, 2009 9:16 am
Beautiful, keep going <3
Comment by Iridescent: Oct 15, 2009 7:05 am
really really good keep writing Smiley
Comment by bleonard27: Oct 18, 2009 11:03 pm
love this
Comment by nina777: Oct 29, 2009 10:19 am
love it
Comment by denixx92: Oct 31, 2009 11:08 am
i love this!!
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