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Wonderful Disaster

is it wrong for me to laugh?

im stabbed in the back
and spat in the face
but in this context
i feel no disgrace

for me it was just an apple
for him it was
a forbidden fruit
all i wanted
was a hunger to suffice
all he wanted
was a new life

i read this now
and i am saddened
cause in this story
where i should be the victim
im the only one left standing with conviction

all of you
battered, twisted, scarred
it amazes me you've gotten this far

in the end
its always a wonderful disaster
if your the one

left standing and laughing

by iusedto
posted on 10/10/2009

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Comment by jakewritespoems: Oct 10, 2009 11:32 pm
haha, I think this falls under sad poetry. I guess it could be funny to some - lol
Comment by SilentWords: Oct 14, 2009 10:24 am
I love the strenght shown in this poem. The ending was lovely.
Comment by JETTA: Oct 17, 2009 12:31 pm
well done
Comment by tylerking93: Oct 17, 2009 8:55 pm
oh holy crak!! ill be one of those last 1s tho... laughter it me wepon and i freeken laugh a funerals... er... wait... u didnt need 2 know that...
Comment by iusedto: Oct 18, 2009 1:52 am
lol it amazes me how the same words in the same order, sound different to others.
Comment by danielle: Oct 23, 2009 9:29 am
now thats funny iusedto
Comment by AndThePointIs: Oct 27, 2009 11:51 pm
(:
Comment by Leeshio: Oct 29, 2009 8:28 pm
loved it Smiley
Comment by DaniDarlz: Nov 5, 2009 8:14 pm
(: chloe and me hav the same comment on here YAY!!!
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Nov 6, 2009 5:48 am
lol this is a little twisted sense of humor, and ironic!
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