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Twist

Cuts upon my arms
And some upon my wrists
But it’s not what you think
This story has a twist…
Damn cat.


by LuciferhasFallen
posted on 12/31/1969

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Comment by scorpio: Dec 21, 2006 9:03 am
hey dats cool! really unique n gud job. i dont htink i can come up wif dat in 1 minute
Comment by LuciferhasFallen: Dec 21, 2006 10:31 am
tankya! I like the "twist" in it!
Comment by gothic666angel6: Dec 21, 2006 12:53 pm
lol wow... yes that is why you declaw cats...
Comment by LuciferhasFallen: Dec 21, 2006 12:59 pm
... two are to old and one ish two young!
Comment by unpredictable: Dec 21, 2006 1:47 pm
wow! i luv it! the twist is AWSOME! i dont know wat else to say! i just luv it!
Comment by DyslexicParanoia: Dec 21, 2006 2:05 pm
funny stuff, good job
Comment by LuciferHasFallen: Dec 21, 2006 3:25 pm
Thanks, I'm trying to get around to writing all genres of poetry, not just dark, which is my forte.
Comment by Jessayyybearrr: Dec 25, 2006 1:25 pm
Interesting.
Comment by tearsofrain: Dec 26, 2006 7:02 pm
you cant imagine how much this made me laugh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment by LuciferHasFallen: Dec 26, 2006 7:55 pm
Tanks to teh both of ya... yep, made me and my friends and suprisingly my mom laugh as well.
Comment by whoknew24: Dec 27, 2006 6:27 am
clever(:
Comment by sammy333: Dec 30, 2006 10:00 pm
Haha lol you wrote that in a minute wow thats awesome haha well done lol.
Comment by LuciferHasFallen: Dec 31, 2006 2:17 pm
thanks. yep, little timed challenges like these are good practice for deadlines.
Comment by randomworks2: Jan 9, 2007 5:55 pm
hehe, mystery twist in a serious poem. fun
-ryan!
Comment by ragingquiet13: Jan 10, 2007 6:31 pm
wow thats really good love it and love the ending very very veyr good
Comment by SYNTHETIKoNIGHTMARE: Jan 11, 2007 6:03 am
lmao i love it
Comment by LuciferHasFallen: Jan 11, 2007 6:50 am
Tannnkkkyyyaaa!!! *inflated ego*
Comment by magel: Jan 11, 2007 1:17 pm
ha that's sweet very funny
Comment by LuciferHasFallen: Jan 12, 2007 9:13 am
TANKYAAAA! Wo0t... 18 comments!!! 6 of which are by me!!! ahahahahahahaha!
Comment by cami: Jan 13, 2007 7:10 pm
hahahah
so funny
i love it! hahaha
Comment by LuciferHasFallen: Jan 17, 2007 5:58 am
tanks
Comment by SisterofDarkness: Feb 7, 2007 10:18 am
that is SO awesome Ari!!! thats kinda funny...sounds like its gonna be all emo or something...ur right...it did ahve a twist!!!
Comment by LuciferHasFallen: Feb 7, 2007 10:25 am
thank you!
Comment by MechanicalAnimal: Jun 14, 2007 8:09 am
Lol, this is funny.
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