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The Power Of Bleach

Here is my question
Here's what I beseech
How does one find
The power of bleach?
Here is a question
For you to decide
Which one is better?
Downy or Tide?
Now here is a question
Yourself you should ask
Which one will clean
And which will just mask?
Whether Grass stains, Mud stains
Or simply grape juice
Which leading detergent
Would be fit for Zuess?
Which brand would I use
When cleaning my shirts?
Which one for you
When washing your skirts
The answer is simple
It comes from the heart
The best one is "Sam's choice"
The one from Wal-Mart

by Alomentis
posted on 04/25/2008

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Comment by purpleice: Apr 25, 2008 5:59 am
lol
Comment by virtualbubblewrap: Apr 25, 2008 3:21 pm
lol thats super simple yet supr hilarious Smiley
Comment by DeathKitty: Apr 25, 2008 5:30 pm
Lol. Thats an awsome poem. It flows so elegantly yet it's super funny.
I hope you do/did well in the contest.
Comment by friendZdogZ: Apr 26, 2008 8:30 am
lol way funny, love it
Comment by thatgirlyoucantforget: Apr 26, 2008 4:58 pm
hehe
way cute =D
Comment by EdensApple91: Apr 27, 2008 12:26 pm
cute
and very funny
Comment by SPAGACKULA: Apr 27, 2008 4:52 pm
DYNOMITE WORK !
Comment by Holychild: Apr 27, 2008 6:54 pm
hahaha. your the man Alomentis. I could never right a funny poem such as this one. that makes you a way better poem writer than i'll ever be. I should just stick to writing stories and movie scripts.
you'll do well in the near future.. God shall see to that. Love&Peace:]
Comment by bookwormgirl: Apr 28, 2008 2:41 pm
hahahahahahaha, so funny! what's up with the contest though? It's kind of random... but i love your poem anyway
Comment by Tauntingviper: Apr 29, 2008 5:22 pm
haha this is great, i use the cheap stuff
Comment by sweetxdevil: May 1, 2008 1:58 pm
LOL that was sooooooooooooooo hilarious!!!!!!
Comment by oceanreverie: May 1, 2008 5:30 pm
hahaha thats funny. i love your randomness! hahah great job
Comment by LexiRae: May 7, 2008 8:51 pm
Lol...
Comment by cryingblackblood: May 9, 2008 7:40 am
lol yay for the renadomness or else i would not know the power of bleach
Comment by AmyRocksIt: May 9, 2008 1:28 pm
This is amazing.
Comment by collie: May 10, 2008 3:00 pm
lol
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