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That ol' copter

Well I got a copter waitin' in the yard
My old lady's complaining
It's so hard

To get a break
Here in this puke green trailer a mine
It's so hard
To get a steak
When you're raking in no dough
It was my mistake
To buy the copter
It was a no go.

Now that old copter used to run
It once was so much fun
Until it died
Rain came down and rusted every side

Now the propellers never turn
Turn the key, engine burns and you explode
My old lady gives me a load

It's not my fault the rain poured down
On this innocent little town
And the copter went and broke its little wings

It's so hard
To get a break
In this piss yellow yard of mine
It's so hard
For me to take
So I think I'll sell the copter
Get my dead dog to a doctor
And buy me a big ol juicy steak.

by Atwood
posted on 06/24/2008

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Comment by tearsofrain: Jun 25, 2008 4:25 pm
i was at first thinking along the lines of question mark.

but the end is most certainly the best thing ever in the world i think.
Comment by holly: Jun 25, 2008 6:39 pm
hahaha
oh wow
this is. absolutely amazing. i think this should be a country hit.
Comment by thefadingscene: Jun 26, 2008 8:16 am
!!!
all it needs is mewsik.
Comment by oceanreverie: Jul 3, 2008 1:23 pm
i really really like this one. its very..interesting. i especially love the last stanza. great work.

and thanks for the comments. =]
Comment by clinxi: Aug 2, 2008 1:02 am
hehe i liike this its realy cool u realy are a great righter keep up the work
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