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skip school day

people stare at me because I don't do my work
they have a secret door in the bathroom
where they can see a golden bathroom
with silver toilet seats and the taps flow
with orange crush and ice.
in the golden bathroom they had a way to skip school
in the vent.


(my 7 year old son's first poem. leave a comment and freak him out.)

by google
posted on 08/07/2008

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Comment by PrettyOdd: Aug 7, 2008 10:09 pm
Haha. Very nice. Now I want an orange crush...
Comment by jacobc: Aug 8, 2008 11:58 am
Nice start to a poet writing career! =]
Comment by loulwa118: Aug 10, 2008 8:06 am
hahaha
he's gr8 for a 7 yr old Smiley
vote up
Comment by aaronxenos: Aug 10, 2008 10:10 am
Haha, quite entertaining.
Comment by wolters: Aug 13, 2008 4:20 pm
that was very good 4 a 7yr old
Comment by prabz: Aug 15, 2008 1:20 pm
good way of starting mate
carry on
Comment by brianabee: Aug 17, 2008 9:51 pm
this is a good poem!
i wouldnt of guess your seven year old son wrote this.
Hes gonna be a great writter someday!
Comment by Bethe7: Aug 19, 2008 4:37 am
pretty good. i wish i would have know about this in my school!!
Comment by Viperrack: Aug 21, 2008 4:52 pm
lol he must have been really inspired..
Comment by shesXaXdisaster: Aug 22, 2008 5:22 pm
wow very nice. a 7 year old writing a poem that awesome is truely amazing. cant wait to see more of his stuff on here!
Comment by Brittany: Aug 28, 2008 6:20 pm
Haha....

thats so cute keep it up!!
Comment by Xou94: Aug 29, 2008 6:48 pm
I'm jealous. =)
Comment by codexxxblue: Sep 18, 2008 10:58 pm
I wish i started writing when i was 7. Id prolly be better by now.
Comment by katwoman124w: Sep 21, 2008 1:02 pm
Aww made me think of the times I skipped school. Smiley
Comment by LKCsouthside: Sep 22, 2008 7:47 pm
haha wow awesome job
Comment by echodelta112: Sep 29, 2008 4:16 pm
haha, awesome for a 7 year old.
Comment by cutiepie: Oct 11, 2008 9:16 pm
i'm totally agree with everyone great poem, oh yeah and i'm jealous toSmiley
Comment by CourtneyT191: Nov 15, 2008 8:48 pm
haha im jealous to Smiley
Comment by HEATHER0511: Jan 3, 2009 11:51 pm
AWWWW.
HE DID A VERY GOOD JOB.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
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