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Pretty fire

pretty fire
coming from my lighter
i want to touch it
as it burns brighter

OUCH! that hurt!

i stuck my finger
over that pretty little flame
and i burnt my self
but could i really be blamed?

by cryingblackblood
posted on 01/31/2008

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Comment by HeartlessAngel: Jan 31, 2008 12:49 pm
lol that's one way to learn not to play with fire. great poem.
Comment by thefadingscene: Jan 31, 2008 1:37 pm
haha. is this the first time you've burned yourself? kidding.

Very nice change from everyone elses boring poetry. =]
Comment by YourmyChemical: Jan 31, 2008 2:47 pm
i love fire lol
yesh im one of them=]
Comment by virtualbubblewrap: Jan 31, 2008 3:08 pm
lol nice love it! oh and btw fadingscene did you ever read some of my random poems? lol you should i highly doubt you will think there boring
Comment by bow16: Feb 1, 2008 11:57 am
LOL...That was nice...Thats so funny...I love fire...(:
Comment by oceanreverie: Feb 1, 2008 7:59 pm
hahaha been there, done that!
Comment by friendZdogZ: Feb 2, 2008 10:09 am
lol love for da fire!!! like ocean, i've been there, done that and many more times!
Comment by EdCarter: Feb 4, 2008 8:31 pm
haha nice and random..but funny
Comment by Tequilla: Feb 7, 2008 8:07 am
Nice, lol, I like it. Good one.
Comment by deadlyinluv24: May 7, 2008 4:43 pm
lol thats kinda funny it reminds me of when me n my brother would play with our lighters
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