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Freestyle

I can overcome every fear I face,
But the pigs are the ones I have to evade,
Otherwise I'm brandashing a switchblade,
Any time any place,
Cuz I aint prepared for any unsuspected chase,
I need my space,
Cuz I can't breathe fluent,
I'm tense like when I skip school and truant,
Or popping some e's and getting loved up, outta my head,
Finding some random girl and dragging her up to my bed,
But she's fit, she's no "keira knightley", she's well fed,
So no "Van Helsing" to cause a scene slash blood shed,
But it doesn't stop him intruding, I aint even finnished fucking her yet,
And he stands at the side of me asking if I'm interested in giving him head,
So I bite a chunk out of his neck,
And he just bled and bled,
The next moment I see a hairy silhouette perched on my window ledge,
Don't ask me what happened to him I havn't seen him since then...

These lyrics should not be taken seriously as they were created under the influence.

by MindTwister
posted on 11/06/2009

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Comments: 13
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Comment by MindTwister: Nov 8, 2009 7:40 am
hahahaha lol, you all forgetting I was under the influence haha, bummers you probably all stay locked up in your houses and getting off on messages sent to you over the internet because all you can do is date virtually because your all so sad you cant stand reality, + where I'm from the girls are just as bad for it so again you can all suck my dick because you must live in a society that doesnt accept free random sex with friends or whoever because there too scared to have fun :L
Comment by MindTwister: Nov 7, 2009 5:10 am
yeah I was rapping freestyle when I had some whizz and I just came out with loads of shit like this :L
Comment by MindTwister: Nov 7, 2009 5:07 am
cuz this websites shit n it wud b funni if a got banned the community is full of bummers :L
Comment by ordinarycanary: Nov 6, 2009 6:09 pm
Hahaha! I love the ending but uh, it's like, half of it is violent and the other half is fucking a chick. I mean, it's just a tad weird to put that in the middle. Not bad though.
And is this supposed to be more of a rap? Because that's how I read it, sounds better that way I think.
Comment by SilentWords: Nov 6, 2009 4:44 pm
I'm not sure how this is a poem..

And Cuz should be "Because"
and outta should be "out of"

This is actually quit terrible, not just the spelling the your so called "free style" needs alot of work.
Comment by MindTwister: Nov 6, 2009 4:56 pm
your just a bummer :L
Comment by MindTwister: Nov 6, 2009 5:08 pm
and quit should be quite so suck my dick :L

you try to be the perfectionist and fuck up haha, that's actually quite humorous.
Comment by PrettyOdd: Nov 6, 2009 7:39 pm
Silent's right. There's really no poetry here, and in case you don't know, this is a poetry site. Not a "I'm just going to post random shit that doesn't make any sense" site. This isn't funny and it doesn't make sense. The rhymes aren't even that good.

On a side note,
you can't edit your comments before you post them, so typos aren't that rare. You can, however, edit the "poems" you post on this site before you post them. You can also edit them after you post them.
So what's your excuse? Do you just not know how to type properly? Or do you just not care?
Comment by alias123: Nov 7, 2009 10:39 pm
You shouldn't write such vile filth. If you just want to get banned it will get done. You're a complete A$$HOLE if you support just 'doing' random chicks. You shouldn't listen to such music either if that's where you're getting your lyrics from. I doubt you could even write a coherent sentence. I'm so sorry for blatantly attacking you, but I think it's what you wanted, bummer.
Comment by alias123: Nov 7, 2009 10:39 pm
I just got stupider
Comment by hotchickxoxo: Nov 8, 2009 12:02 am
What is this supposed to be anyway?? This is supporting violence and just euhh! This is not even a poem! Or funny.
Comment by MindTwister: Nov 8, 2009 7:47 am
and why shudnt I write such vile filth, because you say so? haha, fagot
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Nov 13, 2009 9:39 pm
I'm from Manchester mate...so i know where barnsley is...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

So your "Free random sex" is likley with your dad.
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