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Forbidden Love
I was taking a stroll today
when I saw you walking by
I tried to catch your attention
you didn't dare to reply
why you say no words
I cannot understand
And yet you don't accept
I cannot hold your hand
You have a man in charge
You've stated your dead limit
And I just thought at first
you considered me a dimwit
We can never be together
we just can't connect
for I am a person and you are a dog
our love is incorrect
by USArocker
posted on 09/09/2009
when I saw you walking by
I tried to catch your attention
you didn't dare to reply
why you say no words
I cannot understand
And yet you don't accept
I cannot hold your hand
You have a man in charge
You've stated your dead limit
And I just thought at first
you considered me a dimwit
We can never be together
we just can't connect
for I am a person and you are a dog
our love is incorrect
by USArocker
posted on 09/09/2009
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Comment by jdschmidty: Sep 29, 2009 5:49 pm
lol awesomeComment by skittles: Sep 28, 2009 4:03 pm
...uhm...funny..i gess..Comment by lalaland: Sep 16, 2009 11:29 am
BAHAH thats beautiful 
Comment by FallingFromGrace: Sep 20, 2009 8:44 am
HeheheheheComment by broken3heart3: Sep 13, 2009 8:50 pm
if this is what you get from being half awake then you're good. a little off at some points but gets the message through to others... it's very good Comment by jpl023: Sep 14, 2009 5:18 am
Haha niiiceComment by doomsbringer: Sep 20, 2009 8:06 pm
HAHAHA! niiiice ;pComment by ruzaif: Sep 20, 2009 8:59 pm
Haha..cool one..Comment by Jeffers: Sep 11, 2009 2:51 am
nice poem mate. well writtenComment by JamesR: Sep 11, 2009 2:55 am
Epic read, hope to see more (thumbs up)Comment by CrAzYsTaR: Sep 11, 2009 8:05 am
lol..wow that is so wrong..lolComment by MoonViolet: Sep 11, 2009 2:02 pm
I Know The Feeling.This Is A Very Great Poem.Keep Up The Great Work.Comment by Snoman: Sep 12, 2009 1:34 am
wow this is a good poem
the last two lines were slightly disturbing at first... however it made for a good ending lol
I'm glad i happened to read this
Comment by lexxie2323: Sep 12, 2009 8:08 pm
lmao i love ur poem!!!Comment by dcross: Sep 15, 2009 7:11 am
LMAOComment by beautifuldisaster: Sep 15, 2009 11:12 am
Hahaha for some reason I was expecting that... funny got a laugh outta me on a dismal day anyway Comment by Joey: Sep 16, 2009 8:09 pm
lol i thought it was ok i would like it to rhyme moreComment by Joey: Sep 16, 2009 8:10 pm
dont get me wrong i realy did like it and i did laugh so i guess it did its perpousComment by deathsmessanger: Sep 18, 2009 11:18 am
Love it,Comment by Crushed: Sep 23, 2009 4:09 am
I love the twist.Comment by Rokkii: Sep 24, 2009 5:40 pm
LOL! Didn't see that comging!!! =D Good job!Comment by LKR: Sep 27, 2009 9:37 pm
:0Comment by vadim7: Oct 2, 2009 5:25 pm
its hard to write funny poems
Comment by darkrose: Oct 7, 2009 6:54 pm
lmao lol Comment by Cole: Oct 8, 2009 10:01 pm
lolComment by sweetcaroline: Oct 10, 2009 9:59 pm
Haha that is brilliant!Comment by LKR: Oct 10, 2009 10:00 pm
this supposed to be funny?
cuz i ain't laughing...(or maybe that's your plan? =0 )
Comment by danielle: Oct 12, 2009 6:47 am
twisted.. funny though.. wasnt expecting that...Comment by Becca: Oct 12, 2009 4:33 pm
LOL...Thats funny i didnt expect that ending...Comment by Iridescent: Oct 14, 2009 11:52 am
lolComment by Greyhoundfb: Oct 18, 2009 4:58 pm
ah that is so cute lol.Comment by bb21: Oct 22, 2009 3:49 pm
hahahah nice 1
Comment by AndThePointIs: Oct 27, 2009 8:10 pm
ahaha like the ending Comment by myheartisbroken321: Nov 1, 2009 1:24 am
AOuch, but I bet the dog will like a bit of humping!Comment by mybeloved: Nov 3, 2009 5:42 am
haha randomComment by DaniDarlz: Nov 4, 2009 5:55 pm
this is really good well done lolComment by Fangbanger: Nov 12, 2009 4:14 am
Lol i love this its hilarious