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My Fight With The Mirror

Gah, Don't look at me like that!
you're so incompetent,
you're so damn frustrating
you're so unrealistically ignorant,
tell me, do you choose to be a dumb-dumb?
Or were you simply born that way?
awww, tell me,
Did your mommy drop you on your head?
Well, what did the doctors say?
You know, I'm really fed up with your
senselessness, I never get anywhere
having to take you everywhere,
Hey, what's the glare for, huh?
ooooh I'm Soooooo scared!
And this is just totally pointless
isn't it?
Having an argument with you,
Because nothing sinks in and
nothing ever really gets through!
Ohhh Don't you roll those eyes at me!
I will be happy to kick your butt gladly!
I swear, if you don't wipe that look
right off of that petty face,
I won't hesitate to take
these tweezers to your eye!
...God, you're so helpless pigeon,
and ha, I'm guessing, so am I


>.>

by flippinthrulife17
posted on 10/31/2009

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Comment by NaturalBeauty: Oct 31, 2009 7:05 am
i really like it !
Comment by Healer: Oct 31, 2009 6:35 am
good poem but for some reason kinda irritated me as if i was that character you wer yellling at, hmmm.
Comment by Healer: Oct 31, 2009 6:39 am
ok i had to go back and read it just i didint get the title and what you said, but now i doo! haha my bad its in the morning what do you expect ha! good poem.
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Oct 31, 2009 6:40 am
dude, I know, it was like 5 in the am when I wrote it-I'm a bit out of it too (lol) Sticking tongue out
Comment by chiwa: Oct 31, 2009 8:14 am
Awesome. I like the out-of-it tone, though. The poem's still coherent but you can really tell that this person is going insane.
Comment by kiraralee77: Oct 31, 2009 9:44 am
this was really funny. i love it. i giggled for sure. great write. hehe
Comment by ordinarycanary: Oct 31, 2009 1:06 pm
Haha. Insane and awesome. You were really rude to yourself though... I hope you don't normally do that, haha.
Comment by james1989: Oct 31, 2009 2:36 pm
i love the poem its really good.
Comment by Uncertain: Oct 31, 2009 5:05 pm
I like it.
While I read this I could literally see myself having this argument. The frustration is endless lol
Comment by xmyxlastxbreathx: Nov 1, 2009 2:42 am
I like it.
We all get irritated with ourselves every once and a while.
Nice write Smiley
Comment by mybeloved: Nov 4, 2009 8:22 pm
haha wow
Comment by HappyGoLucky: Nov 5, 2009 9:41 am
haha very clever and wonderfully written, nice xD
Comment by hutwohl58: Nov 7, 2009 7:11 pm
Most of you dont get it. This is what hes hearing. But dont believe it. Dont listen to them. Youll start to believe it. Youre 17 youre out of the roughest time of your life. You know who you are,noone else does however. The best is yet to come. Oh youre going to make mistakes all your life but youre not a dummy. Youre just young and beginning, its all out there you can do anything. ANYTHING. And if you fuck it up. Try again,and again. Youll get it right. I like the poem. I know we can all relate to it. Hut
Comment by crazy8s: Nov 10, 2009 5:50 pm
i can dig it...its just one of those times where just so fed up and angry with yourself...but in the end it only makes up strong
Comment by Shadow17: Nov 18, 2009 3:35 am
Yeah, I know what this means. Some people, including myself have a hard time getting stuff to sink in. Haha, I'm trying to improve, though. Must be frustrating for others. Great original style of honest writing! Great job.
Comment by Kookie3104: Nov 20, 2009 7:16 am
lol! i like this its really cute and i can relate! :]

-Shelly-
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